07-08-2025, 01:47 AM
(This post was last modified: 07-08-2025, 01:55 AM by TJK22. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
Thank you so much again for the updates again. It's like watching a top class movie. The small lesbian part was interesting.
Just an observation:The shiva character is not getting emotionally connected though. His Forceful actions are bit off putting. Pace and style of bharats part is really captivating.
Request:if it's possible, please add more pictures. A few images here and there.It will make the story 10 times better.
Anyway,it's just my personal opinion and request. You are a skilled writer and write it as per your plan. will wait for your erotic story updates.
Wish you all the best bro.
Just an observation:The shiva character is not getting emotionally connected though. His Forceful actions are bit off putting. Pace and style of bharats part is really captivating.
Request:if it's possible, please add more pictures. A few images here and there.It will make the story 10 times better.
Anyway,it's just my personal opinion and request. You are a skilled writer and write it as per your plan. will wait for your erotic story updates.
Wish you all the best bro.


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