04-08-2025, 10:33 AM
(04-08-2025, 08:00 AM)Sage_69 Wrote: Wish there were 3-4 more updates with some hot sex as the slow burn before was too long.
If you have read the last update carefully then you will see how Pavi is fighting with herself over her morals/thoughts and physical desires...If the writer had rushed thru with sex in this last update then this story would not be any different from the thousands of sex stories on this forum...
So I feel that sometimes going a little slow is worth while to explain and justify the emotional turmoil running her mind. I do agree that going "very" slow is also not desirable but let's leave that to what this writer has in mind.
For all you know we might all get stumped again with what is coming next :shy: