04-08-2025, 09:39 AM
(03-08-2025, 10:44 PM)khemucha Wrote: Except for the 3rd pic after the update, the rest were excellent as usual. You seem to have mastered the skill of creating them.
Good development of the story overall. But the second sentence of the passage above read a bit odd - sounded like Dhristi's own narration. please read it yourself and correct if you agree with me.
And don't come under pressure. As they say, size does not matter. Its what you do with what you have that matters.
Thanks i modified the paragraph..
![[Image: Untitled.jpg]](https://i.ibb.co/JjWQmsGX/Untitled.jpg)
Also i liked the third pic as she looks so cute and innocent


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