01-08-2025, 01:09 PM
Nice twist.
I must admit that this story so far has been the best one on xossipy and other forum reads.
Very nicely written and attention seeking story. Nowhere so far felt bored or lagged.
I hope the confrontation between Atul and Supriya shall happen shortly. It would be quite interesting to see that phase. I request please don't make Atul look like lame husband. He must muster some courage and act manly.
Anyways the main decision lies with writer only. All the best for future updates.
I must admit that this story so far has been the best one on xossipy and other forum reads.
Very nicely written and attention seeking story. Nowhere so far felt bored or lagged.
I hope the confrontation between Atul and Supriya shall happen shortly. It would be quite interesting to see that phase. I request please don't make Atul look like lame husband. He must muster some courage and act manly.
Anyways the main decision lies with writer only. All the best for future updates.