Adultery Priya Didi

[shailu4ever]

2 balls to go 5 runs needed was the situation....but don't you think this much escalation needs a bit of background...first day Ravi comes to their house for his official work it leads to this much...Ravi must be a 007 james Bond....?...well the way you though must be the best....i cannot say much...but your writing is very amazing...my best wishes ?

Hi,

I’ll admit, I messed up. 

But when I asked you if I should rewrite that scene, you told me it was fine and to go with my flow. 

So, why are we revisiting this part again?

How many times do you need to beat a dead horse?

Yes, I agree, I’m a dumbo. I don’t know how to write, and I make mistakes. I’ll own that. But I’m also going to correct myself going forward.

I understand that some people can’t seem to move past a mistake, and it just keeps replaying in their minds. 

Fine, I’ll write a scene specifically for those people. You’ll be able to read it too. Hopefully, it’ll help you digest what’s happened so far.


-- Shailu