Adultery Love Sex And War Part 1 : Age Of Darkness

[Rocky@handsome]

I am welcome to all kinds of criticism  Rocky. Even if you do , I won't mind. At the end of the day , its a piece of art , and art can be subjective. And don't worry , I am not changing the story based on fan comments , I already have completed the rough sketch of the entire part 1 of the story. Even now I am brainstorming ideas for Part 2 and find the tentative title for it. I already know how part 2 is going to end , and I definitely plan to end it with sorting many things while at the same type create a major cliffhangar. Because when part 1 ends everyone should feel like what will happen next? Where do we go from here? 


To me that is the driving force for this story. And I have planned up some quiet interesting things that will bring exciting new things in the future. So keep reading and continue being a critique for the story. I consider critique to be a learning lesson , to understand what the reader desires and what he loves , this way I can improve better in future.

Thank you so much for your thoughtful reply! I really appreciate your open-minded attitude towards feedback and how you see every critique as a chance to grow as a writer. It's honestly exciting to hear about all the planning and creative energy you’re pouring into the next parts—I can already tell how much work goes into every twist and character arc. I’m genuinely looking forward to what happens next, especially with those big cliffhangers and surprises. Your passion inspires me as a reader, and I’ll happily keep sharing my thoughts and cheering you on. Keep going strong—you truly have a fan in me! 

And don’t mind if I keep spamming your story with long comments—I just can’t help myself with such an addictive plot! 

Looking forward to more twists and sleepless nights waiting for your updates. 

So tell me, do you want us to be like Sonarika in your life to bring out the Michael in you?   

Keep rocking, Harry Bro!!—you’ve totally got me hooked!

Regards 
Rocky ❤️