Adultery Love Sex And War Part 1 : Age Of Darkness

[Harry Jordan]

Please don’t misunderstand my thoughts.


Regards 

Rocky ❤️

I am welcome to all kinds of criticism  Rocky. Even if you do , I won't mind. At the end of the day , its a piece of art , and art can be subjective. And don't worry , I am not changing the story based on fan comments , I already have completed the rough sketch of the entire part 1 of the story. Even now I am brainstorming ideas for Part 2 and find the tentative title for it. I already know how part 2 is going to end , and I definitely plan to end it with sorting many things while at the same type create a major cliffhangar. Because when part 1 ends everyone should feel like what will happen next? Where do we go from here? 


To me that is the driving force for this story. And I have planned up some quiet interesting things that will bring exciting new things in the future. So keep reading and continue being a critique for the story. I consider critique to be a learning lesson , to understand what the reader desires and what he loves , this way I can improve better in future.