31-07-2025, 04:29 PM
(31-07-2025, 03:35 PM)readersp Wrote: Oh!!! Killer blow!!! Dumped one big bucket of cold water!!!
Hi readersp
Just checking, was that really that bad? I actually planned this twist.
Lots unfulfilled desire. That intensifies their longing. Make them bond stronger.
But is it a big turnoff for the story? Did it come off too harsh?
I can rewrite it and let them continue.
Please let me know your thoughts.
-- Shailu