Adultery Love Sex And War Part 1 : Age Of Darkness

[Rocky@handsome]

 I get your point Rocky , I am in the same boat as you regarding this site. But you don't need to worry on whether the cheater gets rewarded here. Because I am not writing this story with that purpose.

As for Sonarika , like I said , she will have to pay for her sins. The Next Chapter will mark the beginning of the consequence phase of her character , and there is two factors I am doing it this way. One , to take Sonarika's character in a different territory of exploration , because her consequences will also shatter her , she is going to loose everything , not just Hemant , but even respect in Anjali's eyes and most importantly separation from her son Karan which is always traumatising for her mother. And unlike other stories where women often tends to hang on the mother-son emotion , Sonarika will be willing to let go Karan simply for the acceptance of her mistakes , from this point on , Sonarika's character growth will be kickstarted , her consequences will mould her , change her , for better or for worse. Her actual war is only about to begin. And Two , another major factor for this story dynamic is to make the conflict between Sonarik and Meghna to heighten. Meghna will be pissed when Sonarika reveals the truth about her , thus spoiling her plans to destroy her life. This will make Meghna to go to drastic steps to make Sonarika suffer. This approach will help Sonarika and Meghna's war go to a different stage because Sonarika will end up spoiling Meghna's plans to enslave Hemant. 

And the most important aspect is Hemant , the reason for this approach is for the TRANSFORMATION of Hemant , like Harper his best friend said. He has to mould the best parts of his past and present together. And Sonarika breaking his heart will pave the way for Michael King to influence Hemant yet again , and thus the Transformation will begin. This will also change Hemant's approach to things , moulding the best parts of Hemant and King together forging a force that will be a terrifying individual. And like I said in the past , Hemant is not the kind of character to be the "forgiving" type. We will see his true ruthless form now.

Most importantly , Sonarika will basically break Hemant's arc , killing the man she loves. And Michael King will take over his psyche and body , turning him into her nightmare she wished she never had!! 

Please don’t misunderstand my thoughts.

My friend Harry, I have full faith in your perspective and your writing. The way you portray every character, and the depth with which you bring out each character’s emotions for us readers, is truly praiseworthy. There’s no doubt that you are an outstanding author.

One more thing I really admire—this story you’re writing is genuinely unique for this site. You’ve brought all the important elements: action, drama, family emotions, deep love and sacrifice between husband and wife, and even the pain of betrayal. Most impressive, though, is how you’re not showing the husband as weak, but as strong and evolving—even while making the story exciting! This bold new approach is sure to attract a new audience to the site, and it’s refreshing to see a story where a powerful husband can still make the story a hit.

You might remember, when you left the “Love of Voyage” update incomplete, I didn’t share my thoughts then. There were only two reasons for that:  
1) Believe it or not, I sensed there was a twist coming, so I waited before reacting.  
2) I wanted to see what direction you’d take—I never wanted my opinions to influence your creative vision, so I stayed silent.

I truly am a huge admirer of your writing and this story.

Now that it’s clear what path Soni is choosing, I just couldn’t hold back from sharing my feelings.

My intention was never to criticize your story—please don’t get me wrong. Like I’ve said before, your storytelling and style genuinely impress me.

No matter which direction you take things, I’ll keep reading with an open heart. This is just my personal view, not a suggestion to change your story—your experience as a writer speaks for itself, so keep following your own creative vision. Please don’t ever let comments from me or others push you off your original path.

Every character you write is compelling, and your story has me completely hooked.

Move forward with confidence—you always have my and other readers full support! 

Regards 

Rocky ❤️