Adultery Love Sex And War Part 1 : Age Of Darkness
(31-07-2025, 01:26 AM)Rocky@handsome Wrote: The story has reached a very critical point. Now, whether Sonarika confesses her infidelity herself or Hemant finds out from someone else, it doesn’t really matter.
In every situation, only Hemant will face loss, sorrow, and pain.

As for Sonarika, nothing much will happen to her. She will happily live her life with Vikram, and I’m sure that after a few days she won’t even remember Hemant.

When this infidelity began the reason was— though Hemant had all the good qualities of a great lover, husband, father, and person—except one: he was not aggressive or passionate enough in bed. That became the initial reason for Sonarika's affair. At that point in the story, Sonarika’s cheating was only about lust, adventure, and enjoying the forbidden fruit.  
But eventually, Hemant improved that flaw in himself. Still, Sonarika continued her infidelity. Who could be more selfish than this?

In the beginning, it was just lust. After the Bali trip, her decision to completely break all ties with Vikram was absolutely right. After leaving Vikram, she realized that Hemant had those same qualities too—he could also be passionate and adventurous in bed.

But over time, Sonarika went down an even darker path—what began as lust slowly turned into feelings and affection for Vikram, which is the greatest betrayal.

Then came the "Love of Voyage" incident. After that incident, hugging Hemant's picture, crying, and saying "nobody can take your place," showed complete guilt. Even at that stage, it felt like maybe she realized her true love was only Hemant.

But what happened later was a total crossing of the line—thinking of Vikram again and again, or giving him a place in her heart equal to Hemant—This is Biggest Sin one could ever make

A husband might forgive his wife for satisfying physical desires once, but giving somebody else that much place in your heart—a place that was only Hemant’s right—is beyond the gravest sin.

Now, Hemant has nothing left. The only thing he can do is let Soni go quietly and move forward in life as if there was never a girl named Soni Exist. This can bring him mental peace. If he tries to take revenge, he will only lower himself.

For him, completely forgetting Soni would be best, and maybe this is the real revenge.

As for Soni, she will cry for a few days and then start a new life with Vikram.

I’ve often seen on this platform that the one who cheats is the one who stays happy. Every story ends with this conclusion.

I’ve never seen a story where a wife cheats and faces any serious consequences. Either the husband keeps his eyes closed and keeps suffering, or he becomes a cuckold.

In this story, Hemant won’t become a cuckold, nor will he silently suffer his wife’s betrayal, because that’s not the way his character is written—this much is clear.

But the same question remains—did Hemant get any justice? —the answer is No, not at all.

And did Soni lose anything? She didn’t lose anything—she'll just be sad for a few days, that’s all. After going to Vikram, she won’t feel any regret, won’t even remember Hemant, and won’t feel any remorse.

I haven’t read a single story where a cheating wife faced sadness, regret, or any serious consequences after separating from her husband, or even missed him in her dreams.

Honestly, I had high hopes for this story—that maybe the wife would deeply regret her actions, face serious consequences, and miss Hemant a lot after leaving him— Rather badly Crave for Hemant
But now, it doesn’t seem like that’s happening. Even in this story, only the husband will remain sad, and he won’t get any justice.

No matter how Hemant’s past was—even if you portray him as a villain— still can’t justify Sonarika’s big betrayal. And even if Sonarika ends up getting hurt because of Hemant’s enemies, that can’t be called repentance for her betrayal. Repentance would only be if she can never be happy without Hemant, misses him so much, values him so much that her life becomes like a zombie—but I don’t see that happening here.

Sorry, but I’d like to mention a story called "My Wife, Why Did She Betray Me."

At least in that story, the wife punished herself a lot. She could never forgive herself, lived like a servant with her husband, and punished herself so much that she never claimed any right over him, didn’t even consider herself worthy of him. She just looked after the kids and prayed for death every single day—because she didn’t want to make her husband more unhappy by committing suicide. In a way, she started seeing her husband as God and lived as his servant.

The husband in that story was probably named Savarna. He was also a very strong man. Since the story was set in a village, he couldn’t divorce her. If he could have, he definitely would have divorced her, and the only reason he suffered her infidelity in silence was that he knew his wife wouldn't be able to bear it and would take her own life. In that story, at least some justice was given to the husband.

But all the other stories on this platform always end with the cheater staying happy, and that makes me really sad.

From your story, I truly hoped the cheating wife would, in the end, regret a lot that she lost a husband like Hemant. But sadly, even in this story, it seems Sonarika will not face true regret, guilt, or any real consequences.

Anyway, I am not criticizing your story, nor am I pressuring you to change it.

I am only expressing my feelings—that when I started reading and saw Hemant’s character, I hoped this story would truly bring justice for the husband and show a different result from all the other stories on this platform. But it seems, once again, in the end, the cheating wife will end up happy because she gets what she wants.

Sorry if I spoke too much. I still respect you as a writer and am a huge fan of your work.

Best Regards

Rocky ❤️?

rocky what the view man i am liking this, but as you said it may not be happen not because of another reason except love, yes majority stories are like this but you know what happens to that stories readers forgot them where husband become the winner in the end, have you seeing this much engagement on game40it stories he had written so well but not so popular, same case of krish_999 just read his earlier stories, even in the first part of kmwkmw series, krish and meera are separated for the good but then comes the line "" "If you're a lover, you gotta be a fighter." "Because if you don't fight for your love, what kind of love do you have?"."" whether reader forced him to write part-2 (part-3 is purely) or its author conflict whatever the reason it always comes to the love where sacrifices needed to be made. 

been reader we should share the blame if the story has been like this because where there is sex episodes, we all enjoyed it but what a hypocrite we all are when it does not follow the path it shall be (not target on u man it just general)

i really loved the story till the bali episode where sona wants to forget the mistake and been with hemant with love bases, but harry did it again by completing the circle again sometimes hemisphere is better then sphere. i started it because of hemant character because it was 360 degree opp. to krish but hary is trying it to develop him in the future krish, i think the amount of love krish meera have every character is so how inclined towards them, harry use his hemant a krish where he is a poweful person but still submissive to sona in the same way krish was to meera, as the story developing i am sure hemant forgive sona in the end
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