Adultery Love Sex And War Part 1 : Age Of Darkness
The story has taken a very painful turn. Now, whether Sonarika confesses her infidelity herself or Hemant finds out from someone else, it doesn't matter. In any case, Hemant will be the one to suffer loss, sorrow, and pain. Sonarika's fate is sealed; she'll move on with Vikram and live happily. I'm sure she won't even remember Hemant after a few days.

This infidelity started because Hemant lacked a certain quality - he wasn't aggressive or passionate enough in bed. But over time, her reasons for infidelity seem to have evolved into something more sinister. She's become selfish, prioritizing her desires over her relationship with Hemant.

Initially, it was just lust, adventure, and the thrill of forbidden fruit. But after the Bali trip, her decision to break off with Vikram was correct. After breaking off with Vikram, she realized Hemant had qualities she needed, including being a good lover and adventurous.

However, over time, Sonarika's actions became more dangerous, as what started as lust turned into feelings and affection for Vikram. This is the biggest betrayal.

The incident at "Love of Voyage" and her subsequent actions, including hugging Hemant's picture and saying "nobody can take your place," showed guilt. At that point, it seemed like she might realize her true love was Hemant. But what happened after that crossed the line of infidelity. Because she kept thinking of Vikram and giving him a place in her heart that only belonged to Hemant. This is not just a sin, but crossing the boundary of a grave mistake.—or (Biggest Sin)

Now, Hemant's best option is to let Sonarika go and move on with his life as if she never existed. This might be the only way he can find mental peace. Taking revenge would only make him smaller in his own eyes. Forgetting Sonarika completely might be the best revenge for him.

I've noticed a trend on this platform where the person who cheats often ends up happy. Most stories conclude with the cheater living happily. I've never read a story where the wife who cheated faced serious consequences. Either the husband turns a blind eye and suffers in silence or becomes a cuckold. But Hemant won't become a cuckold or silently suffer due to his character.


Still, the question remains: Will Hemant Get justice? The answer is no.

Sonarika hasn't lost anything; she'll just cry for a few days, and then her new life with Vikram will begin. She won't feel regret, remember Hemant, or experience remorse. I've never read a story where the cheating wife suffered, regretted, or faced serious consequences after separating from her husband.

I had high hopes for this story, expecting the wife to feel immense regret for her actions, face serious consequences, and remember Hemant dearly. But it seems that's not happening.

Again, the husband will be the one suffering, and justice won't be served.

Hemant's past doesn't justify Sonarika's infidelity, and even if Sonarika faces physical harm due to Hemant's enemies, it won't be a consequence of her infidelity.

True remorse would mean Sonarika couldn't live happily without Hemant, remembered him dearly, and valued him highly— infact crave for Hemant, But I don't see that happening here.

I'd like to mention a story, "My Wife, Why Did She Betray Me?" where the wife punished herself severely, never forgave herself, and lived like a servant to her husband. She only cared for her children and prayed for death, not wanting to cause her husband more pain by committing suicide. She considered her husband godlike and lived as his servant. The husband, Savarna, was strong but couldn't divorce her due to the village setting. He knew his wife couldn't bear the separation and would commit suicide.
In that story, the husband got some justice to some extent.


But most stories on this platform end with the cheater living happily, which saddens me. I had hoped this story would be different, but it seems Sonarika will escape unscathed and live happily with Vikram.

I'm not criticizing your writing or pressuring you to change the story. I'm just expressing my feelings.

When I started reading the story and saw Hemant's character, I expected justice for the husband and a different outcome. But it seems that's not happening. Again, the cheating wife will live happily because she'll get what she wants.

I apologize if I've said too much. I still respect your writing and am a big fan of your work.


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