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Adultery Sanskari Aurat bani Lund ki Deewani
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(28-07-2025, 01:12 PM)Amino Wrote: Bro stick to your story plot... Aise hi agar tum story change karte rahoge to tum khud age nahi likh paoge... Your story is superb and fantastic ise kharab na karo... Ye story hi adultery hai title se bhi sabhi se bhi aur na is story mai beto ka jyada important hai phir bhi kyu beto ko hero banane Mai lage ho.. ye incest hota to bat alag hai but adultery mai jaisa chal raha hai waisa hi rahe... Khud ko beto ki jagha sadhu ke jagha dekho ya 3rd point of view se dekho tab maza ayega... Jitne bhi writers apne story line change kiye hai wo bohot jald story likhna chhod diye hai aur wo mai iss story ke sath nahi hote dekhna chahta... Avni land ki gulam hai aur wo sirf lund se chude fir chahe wo bete ka ho gunde ka ho ya bhikari ka ho har koi use chode

Bhai ap story ko ek female caracter ke view se delh rahe hai or mai uski position se to ye dono hi poin of view se story jabardast hogi or jab story me family involve hui hai to akele ek hi caracter ke maze se log ek time baad boar ho nate hai jab ki revenge me sab ke maze hote hai isliye mene bola ap gyani hai shayad mai galat ho sakta hu lr mane wahi bola jab writer ne pucha agar meri baat se ap ko dukh hua ho to ap se or writer se mafi mangta hu
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RE: Sanskari Aurat bani Lund ki Deewani - by Ayush01111 - 28-07-2025, 03:16 PM



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