Adultery Priya Didi

[Raj087]

Hey [Reader's Name],

Thank you for your honest feedback. I really appreciate you taking the time to share your thoughts,  it means a lot to me!

I understand your concerns about the kiss scene, and I’d like to offer some clarity. Ravi and Neetu have been exchanging looks, teasing messages, and building a growing tension for several days. They’ve shared intimate, flirtatious moments, and in this context, the kiss wasn’t something out of nowhere. It’s a natural escalation given the circumstances.

Ravi and Neetu have been exchanging looks and lots of teasing late night Messages.   

These days people meeting online and after a few flirting online messages, meet separately outside, I don't know about in India, but I have seen a of them in my close Indian circle there.

To clarify, I don’t believe that a woman would let someone get that close, especially with something as intimate as licking Rasmalai syrup off her cheek, unless she was very comfortable with the person to go all in.

You also have to understand and remember the scenes that preceded this scene, where they had a steamy late morning where they exchanged very intimate moments at the shower scene.  

The minute she let him kiss and lick the cheek where she put Rasmalai Syrup, she is more than willing to let him kiss her. If a woman let someone up to that extent, trust me, she lets him go all the way.

You can trust me in that, Being a woman I can confirm that. 

I wrote that kiss and lick of her cheek scene yesterday and you acknowledged that you liked it. If you approve yesterday's scene and progress, it is a clear go ahead at this point to go and cross the line, that shows the LONGING. 

They have "the longing" which has been building for last several days. And they have "The Opportunity". These two will lead them to the rest.

Trust me, as a woman myself, I can confirm that when a woman lets someone this far in, she’s already mentally and emotionally primed to take all the following steps. You can see this in how Neetu allows the kiss to happen after that intimate moment. This progression has been building between them for days, the longing, the chemistry, the opportunity, and now the actual connection.

I completely get that you might prefer more interaction or background before such a moment, but the tension between them was already in place. If you’re onboard with the previous scenes till my first post today,  particularly the intimate one with the cheek,  then the kiss itself is simply a logical continuation. Actually she has given a go ahead at that point itself.  They’ve both been waiting for this moment, and when it happens, it’s the culmination of everything that’s come before.

Again, I really appreciate your kind words about my characters and writing. Your feedback is valuable, and I’ll continue to work on making sure the progression of the story feels right. 

Thanks again for your support, I’m glad to have you as a reader.

PS:  I can prolong this for a few more days, but it only make it feels like dragging and we have yet to jump in to the main story.  

Please let me know your thoughts.

Best

-- Shailu

I completely get your point...and if you remember i said i can be wrong... But what i felt was that bit more interactions were required in that scene...its just like serving a dosa in platter without preparing sambar...sambar enhances the taste of Dosa... description can be monotonous in slow burn treatment..what keeps engaging is a conversation through which emotions and desires are depicted for the readers...now coming to why i don't relate somehow is all the charectors are simply falling for Ravi married or unmarried...it seems husbands have no impact left in their life and as if they are looking for a guy like Charles Shobhraj who can be like a magnet and pull them out of their marital fidelity....i completely agree its quite possible but to create such a moment a strong background is required i can agree with one women geeting attracted but all your charectors walk in same path...

I know its your story and you have full right to create anything out of the charectors but if you just add few detail conversation and dailogues amongst the charectors then the background is established before action...its just a suggestion...

I won't intrude again please continue the way you think is best... your write-up is go very good i can't Stop my self from indulging into what i feel...

Thanks again for your efforts...i truly mean it...