Adultery Priya Didi

[shailu4ever]

Its a Good update but somehow i don't agree with you...who on earth will allow a person to kiss directly on face and lips without any proper background ? Is Ravi a Greek God or a Charles Shobhraj that any women will get into his trap without any effort...well i look for stuff which have proper background here i found it missing... but what i appreciate his your charectors and your way of portraying them... story wise i somehow don't agree with this plot...its entirety my view and i can be wrong...but personally i would prefer more interaction and background before such move...you are a awasome writer and i truly mean it... please continue the way you see it blooming.. thanks again for your efforts...i truly appreciate

Hey Raj

Thank you for your honest feedback. I really appreciate you taking the time to share your thoughts,  it means a lot to me!

I understand your concerns about the kiss scene, and I’d like to offer some clarity. Ravi and Neetu have been exchanging looks, teasing messages, and building a growing tension for several days. They’ve shared intimate, flirtatious moments, and in this context, the kiss wasn’t something out of nowhere. It’s a natural escalation given the circumstances.

Ravi and Neetu have been exchanging looks and lots of teasing late night Messages.   

These days people meeting online and after a few flirting online messages, meet separately outside, I don't know about in India, but I have seen a of them in my close Indian circle there.

To clarify, I don’t believe that a woman would let someone get that close, especially with something as intimate as licking Rasmalai syrup off her cheek, unless she was very comfortable with the person to go all in.

You also have to understand and remember the scenes that preceded this scene, where they had a steamy late morning where they exchanged very intimate moments at the shower scene.  

The minute she let him kiss and lick the cheek where she put Rasmalai Syrup, she is more than willing to let him kiss her. If a woman let someone up to that extent, trust me, she lets him go all the way.

You can trust me in that, Being a woman I can confirm that. 

I wrote that kiss and lick of her cheek scene yesterday and you acknowledged that you liked it. If you approve yesterday's scene and progress, it is a clear go ahead at this point to go and cross the line, that shows the LONGING. 

They have "the longing" which has been building for last several days. And they have "The Opportunity". These two will lead them to the rest.

Trust me, as a woman myself, I can confirm that when a woman lets someone this far in, she’s already mentally and emotionally primed to take all the following steps. You can see this in how Neetu allows the kiss to happen after that intimate moment. This progression has been building between them for days, the longing, the chemistry, the opportunity, and now the actual connection.

I completely get that you might prefer more interaction or background before such a moment, but the tension between them was already in place. If you’re onboard with the previous scenes till my first post today,  particularly the intimate one with the cheek,  then the kiss itself is simply a logical continuation. Actually she has given a go ahead at that point itself.  They’ve both been waiting for this moment, and when it happens, it’s the culmination of everything that’s come before.

Again, I really appreciate your kind words about my characters and writing. Your feedback is valuable, and I’ll continue to work on making sure the progression of the story feels right. 

Thanks again for your support, I’m glad to have you as a reader.

PS:  I can prolong this for a few more days, but it only make it feels like dragging and we have yet to jump in to the main story.  

Please let me know your thoughts.

Best

-- Shailu