27-07-2025, 04:21 AM
Its a Good update but somehow i don't agree with you...who on earth will allow a person to kiss directly on face and lips without any proper background ? Is Ravi a Greek God or a Charles Shobhraj that any women will get into his trap without any effort...well i look for stuff which have proper background here i found it missing... but what i appreciate his your charectors and your way of portraying them... story wise i somehow don't agree with this plot...its entirety my view and i can be wrong...but personally i would prefer more interaction and background before such move...you are a awasome writer and i truly mean it... please continue the way you see it blooming.. thanks again for your efforts...i truly appreciate