Adultery Priya Didi

[Raj087]

The update is very good....but please add conversations between the characters..only description can be monotonous at times...Here i find minimal interaction with elaborative description of every scene which somewhere kills the realism of a Event and makes it very essay type read...i am enjoying your writing style but this is what i felt after reading 20 pages since the starting....hope you don't mind me pointing this...rest you are one of the best story tellers i have come accross here...