23-07-2025, 06:36 PM
(23-07-2025, 06:15 PM)readersp Wrote: Shailu ji.. one small observation.. It was during the day that Neetu had her bath..right..the last line above .."But tonight"..it was still day time only..right
Hi readersp
Wow, thank you so much for catching that!
I really appreciate your attention to detail. It’s exactly this kind of feedback that helps make the story stronger.
You’re absolutely right, it was my mistake. I just fixed that to stay consistent with the timeline.
Thank you so much readersp. I really mean it.
With warm regards.
-- Shailu