Adultery Supriya: Ek Jawan Biwi ki Kahani

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Hate nahi hai ji ... mai to uski mansikata ko aur aage badhane ke liye uksa raha houn ... aur enjoyment me koi kami nahi hai ...

To just view the character as slutty is not correct ... its her sense of conceited entitlement  and self-serving righteousness that's what makes her unique. Actually she does not come across as slutty much. More as someone always looking to over-reach herself, morality and values be damned. Just calling a spade a spade - isme burai kya hai. woh kehate hain na "lund ko lund nahi bolenge to kya bolenge" - bus like this only.

My comments are on the character painted by the writer only. Agar writer ko lagta hai ki maine character to galat samjha hai to writer keh sakte hain ki for this this and this reason(from story so far), aap galat hain, aapne yeh yeh aur yeh nazarandaaz kar diya. Negative or positive emotional response to the character is a testimony to the writer's skill. Ab dekhiye, Arti abhi to aayi thi, aur kitni azeez ho gayi hai.

Excellent update and good story progression. Ab to intezaar hai dono nanad bhabhi ki double teaming ka, specially ek doosre ki mauzoodgi me - Arti Supriya Vikram Jai. Night long orgy.  Mazza ayega unko bhi aur humme bhi.  I hope ap Vikram koi knight in shining armour ya farishta ban kar nahi ubhrega ... suit nahi karega uske character ko ... mere khyal se.

Ok duly noted. But tumhare kuch comments were like, "make her suffer", "she has no soul", "She is evil" (in hindi). Thats why I said. Otherwise, all the R words you used for her are alright for a fictional story in a forum like this.

By the way, very well enumerated by you in the first para of your comments above. I agree with all you have said. But while her values be damned, I do hope that she does not lose her morality and atleast stays true to her Aarti bhabhi with whom she had such a love n trust based bond at the start of this story.