21-07-2025, 01:54 PM
(21-07-2025, 01:39 PM)readersp Wrote: For a moment before I scrolled to read the next line I felt that they are going to kiss..but if it happens just like that what is the thrill. The writer in you made the call to shatter the moment.. Will wait again for the crescendo to build again!!! Wow!!!
Hi readersp
I'm so glad you felt that tension building. It’s exactly what I was hoping for.
That sense of anticipation is crucial, especially with Priya Didi at the heart of this story.
Everything revolves around her, and while the moment between Ravi and Priya could’ve unfolded with a simple kiss, I wanted to make sure it wasn’t that easy or shallow.
This is about much more than surface-level attraction. Priya's character is layered and complex, and I’m building towards revealing her depth in a way that makes every small moment, every glance, carry weight.
Shattering that moment now allows us to explore the true emotional buildup and layers beneath the surface, it's all part of Priya’s journey.
The crescendo is coming, but it’ll be earned, not rushed.
Thank you for feeling the shift, I can't wait to build the tension even further as we dig deeper into Priya’s world.
Stay tuned… things are just getting started
Once again many thanks to you for your continuous support.
This truly helps me motivated and go on writing the story.
With warm regards
-- Shailu
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