19-07-2025, 11:37 AM
(This post was last modified: 19-07-2025, 03:58 PM by Greenwood. Edited 2 times in total. Edited 2 times in total.)
Update 57
Arjun ke ghar ka angan, puri gali ka jashn
Poore mohalle mein ek hi baat chal rahi thi –
Arjun ne college team ko tournament jeetaya!
Golden boot bhi mila!
Man of the tournament bhi!
Aur sabse badi baat – poore area ka naam roshan kiya!
Ghar ke bahar rangoli bani thi. Gate pe "Congratulations Arjun!" ka handmade banner latka hua tha.
Dhoop me chamakta hua welcome decoration… aur har thodi der me koi na koi mehmaan aa jata, ladoo aur halwa le kar.
Sofe par:
Pratap ek dam chest proud karke, ek-ek ko sambhal ke thank you keh rahe the.
Madhu sabke liye paani aur chai bhejne me busy thi, lekin chehra pura khil raha tha.
Unke saath Azhar bhi baithe the – unka haath bandha tha (dawai lene ki wajah se), lekin expression me pure fauj ka fakhar tha.
Beech me Arjun baitha tha – ek white kurta aur blue jeans me, thoda thaka hua lekin poora hero lag raha tha.
Peeche se:
Shanu ek tray me mithai leke sabko offer kar rahi thi, aur beech beech me kisi aunty ke comments pe chhupke hans bhi padti.
Ammu thodi door se sab kuch observe kar rahi thi… ek aise nazar se jisme kisi ka fख्र proud bhi tha, apnapan bhi
Aur Asma, apni usual calm expression ke sath sab guests ka welcome kar rahi thi.
Padosan Aunty (Pallu sambhalte hue)
Madhu ji, itna badha kaam kiya aapke bete ne… hum sabko aap logon pe fakhar hai!
Madhu (halki si muskaan ke sath)
Sab aap logon ke duaon ka asar hai… aur isne mehnat bhi bohot ki.
Ek uncle (Pratap se)
Pratap bhai, yeh to seedha national team me jaana chahiye!
Pratap (fakh se)
Usi ki taiyaari hai ab… college ka stage chhota pad raha hai iske liye.
Arjun thoda sharma jaata hai… aur peeche murke Shanu ko aankhon se kuch signal deta hai.
Shanu hansi rok ke chaay ki tray aage kar deti hai, jaise keh rahi ho – ab bhag mat, abhi aur log baaki hai!
Ammu ki nazar us par tik jaati hai…
Wo is bheed bhare moment me bhi Arjun ke chehre ki thakaan, uski aankhon ki gehrayi, sab dekh pa rahi thi.
Background me:
Bachche Arjun ke saath photo le rahe hote hain, koi autograph le raha hota hai, aur ek speaker me cricket ka anthem chal raha hota hai jo Arjun ke naam se joda gaya hai.
Azhar (Madhu se halki awaaz me)
Is baar to humare bachche chhaa gaye… chhota Arjun aur Taz dono.
Madhu
Haan… aur sabse badi baat yeh hai ki sab milke jeete… sirf khel nahi, dil bhi.
Scene thoda zoom out hota hai, camera ghar ke bahar tak le jata hai…
Mohalle wale gate ke bahar bhi khade ho kar Arjun ke naam ki taali baja rahe hote hain.
Cut to – Ammu ka chehra… wo Arjun ki taraf dekhti hai.
Aur uske aankhon me ek shabd ubharte hain…
Yeh ladka mera hai.
[b]Midnight – Zaheer ki chhat[/b]
Hawa thodi thandi thi, asmaan me kuch taare the… aur chhat ke ek kone me ek parchaayi halke kadam se chalti hui dikh rahi thi.
Iron railing ke paas khada Arjun, haath pocket me, aankhon me wahi usual adaa —
jaise kisi ko dhoondh raha ho, lekin shikayat bhi saath laaya ho.
Thodi der baad uske peechhe se soft footsteps aate hain…
Ammu, usi simple night kurti me, baalon ko clip se bandh rakha tha.
Uske chehre par ek halki muskaan… jaise usse pata tha ki Arjun aayega.
Arjun (bina uski taraf dekhe)
Sab aaye the… aunty, uncle, Mohini aunty ke dono ladke, woh chashmish padosi, uska cat wala nephew bhi…
Bas ek nahi aaya.
Ammu (jaanti thi kiski baat ho rahi hai)
Wo thoda busy tha… actually kal se uska kuch official kaam hai. Usne bola bhi tha ki...
Arjun (ghuma ke uski taraf dekhte hue)
Tu na bas excuse banana seekh gayi hai uske liye…
Ek taraf tera bhai, doosri taraf tera… main.
Kabhi kabhi lagta hai dono alag-alag league ke players hain.
Ammu (narm hansi ke saath)
Aur tu kya sochta hai? Tera naam trophy pe likh gaya to main bhool jaungi kis taraf hoon?
Arjun (uski taraf do kadam badha ke)
Main to bas itna chahta tha…
Ek simple congratulations uske mooh se bhi mil jaata, to acha lagta.
Tu to samajhti hai na…
Ammu (nigah jhuka ke, phir uthake softly)
Main bhi wahi hoon, Arjun… jahaan tu hai.
Dono ke beech ek halki khamoshi… na uncomfortable, na zyada poetic… bas real.
Arjun (ek dum se mood change karte hue)
Waise ek cheez reh gayi hai…
Mujhe mera aakhiri reward nahi mila.
Ammu (nazar se uska matlab samajhne ki koshish karte hue)
Kya reward?
Arjun (thoda aur paas aake)
Final jeetne ke baad jo sabse zaroori prize tha…
Sab mila… trophy, medal, claps, photo…
Lekin tu… tune mujhe kuch nahi diya.
Ammu uski aankhon me dekhti hai. Kuch seconds tak kuch nahi bolti. Sirf uska chehra padhti hai.
Phir wo dheere se peeche mudti hai…
Scene fade out hota hai —
Camera us white door pe rukta hai jo Zaheer ke ghar ke ek guest room ka hai.
Cut to: Bedroom ka andhera, jisme sirf ek halki moonlight ki lehar hai.
Curtain hawa se hil raha hai…
Koi awaaz nahi…
Bas ek softness… ek warmth…
Jisme shabdon ki zarurat nahi hoti.
Ammu ka room
Dim yellow light bedside lamp se nikal kar room ke ek kone me tikhi si shadow banati hai. Hawa me ek halka citrus aur mitti ka mix scent… jaise baarish aayi ho aur usme koi purani diary band ho gayi ho.
Arjun, bed ke edge par baitha hua…
Uski elbows thighs par tikki hain, aur ungliyan apas me fasi hui.
Room ke kone me padhe books, dusty shelf, aur window ke pare curtain ko dekh raha tha…
Jaise kisi aur cheez ka intezaar ho raha ho — ya kisi ehsaas ka.
Tabhi ek halki si kharash jaisi sound hoti hai…
Room ke attached store ka darwaza dheere se khulta hai.
Wahan se Ammu bahar aati hai
Ek cotton ka soft shawl uske kandhon se lapeta hua…
Chehra thoda shadow me, lekin uski aankhon ka laalpan aur gaalon ki halki si gulabi chhaya us soft yellow light me saaf dikh rahi thi.
Uske kadam halki si thartharahat ke sath chalte hai, lekin andar ek decision clearly le chuka hota hai.
Ammu ka har step uske apne emotions ke against jaise ek silent fight jaisa lagta hai.
Arjun ka dhyaan us taraf jaata hai.
Wo thoda seedha baithta hai, aankhon me ek soft welcome ki chamak ke saath.
Arjun (dheere se muskurate hue)
Ammu...
Lekin jaise hi wo uska chehra dekh kar uski aankhon ki halchal ko padhta hai…
Uske face ki muskurahat thodi si fade ho jaati hai.
Wo samajh jaata hai — yeh moment sirf uske liye nahi, Ammu ke liye bhi ek kasauti hai.
Ammu, ab bilkul uske saamne.
Thodi der tak aankhen uski aankhon me tikaye rakhti hai —
Kuch kehna chahti hai…
Magar alfaaz nahi milte.
Phir wo uski taraf ek halki si neck tilt ke saath dekhti hai —
Jaise aankhon se keh rahi ho: pesh hai… tumhara reward.
Phir uski nazar neeche jhukti hai…
Aur uske dono haathon ka grip dheere dheere dheela padta hai…
Shawl, uske kandhon se nikal kar… bed ke kinare par gir jata hai.
Ek silken sa sound… halki si gasp… aur ek stillness room me cha jaati hai.
Camera Arjun ke face pe zoom karta hai
Jaha pehle ek subtle si smile thi… ab ek mixture of softness, emotion, aur respect nazar aata hai.
Wo kuch nahi bolta.
Uske haath aage nahi badhte.
Sirf uski aankhen — jaise poora waqt usme tham gaya ho.
Scene fade out hota hai...
Background me ek faint ambient music – sirf dard aur pyaar ka ek melting point...
Ammu ka shawl girte hi waqt jaise thahar gaya tha.
Wo ab Arjun ke saamne khadi thi — usi undergarment set mein jo Arjun ne khud uske liye chuna tha… ek soft pastel tone ka, lace-edged piece… jisme na kuch zyada tha, na kuch kam… sirf ek khoobsurat khayal ki tarah.
Uska doodh jaisa safed rang, uske smooth curves, aur us light ki reflection… sab kuch Arjun ki aankhon ke liye ek aise tasveer ki tarah tha jo usne kabhi sirf sochi thi — aaj saamne thi.
Arjun
(Uski aankhon me ek mixture of disbelief aur desire)
Ammu…
Lekin uske lips pe koi lafz nahi aaya.
Sirf uska chest halki halki saans se upar neeche ho raha tha… jaise dil ne tezi se beat karna shuru kar diya ho.
Ammu ke haath apne peechhe ki taraf bandhe hue the, jaise khud ko present kar rahi ho bina kisi shabd ke. Arjun ki aankho ko is moment par yakeen nahi ho raha tha ki Ammu uska pyaar uske samne kabhi aise bhi pesh hovegi... Ammu ke tight round shape chuche is tight bra me or bhi jyada attractive lag rahe they mano kisi karigar ne apni kala se koi murat banai ho, Ammu ka navel paas se dekhne par use photo se bhi jyada sundar lag rahi thi or uski thighs us satin panty me bilkul ek aag laga rahi thi, sabse dilchasp hissa ammu ko cleavage or upper boobs lag raha tha bilkul hot
Arjun ab dheere se uthta hai…
Uske har step me ek halke vibration jaisa tha… kuch bolne se pehle usne Ammu ke baalon ke paas apna chehra le jaakar uske kaan ke paas halki si saans bhari…
Arjun ne apne dono haathon se uske kandhon ko chhua…
Naram, dhire… jaise kisi tasveer ko chhune se wo mitt na jaye.
Uske touch me koi jaldi nahi thi, koi hungama nahi tha — sirf ek gehri chaahat, ek jazba, ek vaada.
Ek khamoshi thi jisme lafzon ki zarurat nahi thi…
Ek raat thi jisme chand bhi darwaze ke peeche ruk gaya tha…
Arjun ne uska haath apne dil par rakha…
Aur phir use apni baahon me le liya — dhire dhire, bina shabd ke, sirf ek jazbaat ke saath…
Ammu Arjun ki baahon me aayi thi... lekin Arjun ab bhi usse seedhe dekh nahi pa raha tha.
Uski aankhon ke saamne ab bhi wohi lamha repeat ho raha tha... jab shawl gira tha, aur uski Ammu... uski Ammu uske saamne us tarah khadi thi, bina kuch kahe, sirf uski aankhon me ek jawab le kar.
Us pal Arjun ka bas chalta to waqt ko wahi freeze kar deta.
Uske haath ab bhi uski kamar ke aas-paas the...
Ammu ke soft skin ki warmth uske haathon me ghul chuki thi...
Wo halki si thartharahat... uska dhadkanon ka tezi se chalna... sab kuch Arjun mehsoos kar raha tha.
Uske liye ye koi physical moment nahi tha...
Ye uske liye Ammu ki taraf se ek vishwas tha.
Ek jazba tha… “Main sirf teri hoon.”
Arjun ke liye us se bada medal duniya me kuch nahi tha.
Usne apni aankhen band kar ke Ammu ke forehead se forehead lagaya…
Uski saans uske chehre pe pad rahi thi…
Uski aankhon ke saamne ek ek flashback chal raha tha:
– Jab usne pehli baar use college ke registration counter par dekha tha...
– Jab unka pehla jhagda hua tha…
– Jab Ammu ne pehli baar uska naam liya tha bina gusse ke…
– Aur jab usne use maaf kiya tha…
Aur ab...
Ammu uske saamne thi — poori, sachaayi ke saath, sharam ke saath... lekin kisi bhi dar ke bina.
Arjun ka gala bhari ja raha tha…
Lekin usne apni aankhen kholi aur dheere se Ammu ke cheek ko chhua…
Ek dum naram, jaise koi gudiya ho…
Apne andar ke jazbaat ko thoda rok kar, usne use seedhe aankhon me dekha.
Arjun
(Tikta hua, halki si muskurahat ke saath, dil se)
Tujhe dekhke lagta hai... jaise sab kuch jeet gaya ho main.
Match, trophy, duniya... sab.
Tujh se zyada khoobsurat reward... maanga hi nahi kabhi.
Ammu ne sirf aankhon me aankhon daali…
Uski aankhon me ek ajeeb si shanti thi… jaise wo bhi uske har lafz ko mehsoos kar rahi ho.
Phir Arjun uske balon me haath ghumata hai… aur halki si masti bhari cheekhi deta hai…
Arjun
Par ek problem hai…
Itni khoobsurat lag rahi hai tu… ki ab mujhe neend nahi aane wali.
Ammu halki si muskura deti hai, sharma jaati hai, aur apna sir uske chest me chhupa leti hai.
Arjun usse aur kas ke pakad leta hai…
Uski dhadkanon ka ek ek beat… ab Arjun ke dil me baj raha tha…
Koi music nahi chal raha tha, lekin ek mehfil thi…
Do dilon ke darmiyaan…
Light aur zyada dim ho jaati hai…
Sirf unka silhoutte dikhayi deta hai…
Aur Arjun ka voice-over sunai deta hai:
Kabhi kabhi jeetna sirf medal nahi hota…
Kabhi kabhi jeet... kisi ka saath hota hai.
Ammu... meri jeet hai.
Ammu ab bhi Arjun ke baahon me thi, lekin Arjun ki aankhon me ab sirf ek jazba tha — mohabbat ka, lekin izzat ka… samajhne ka.
Usne dheere se Ammu ke kandhe se apna haath hataya, uska chehra apni ungliyon se thoda upar uthaya… uski aankhon me jhaankte hue, jaise kisi jawaban ke liye nahi... ek samajh ke liye.
Arjun
Yeh sab... kya hai Ammu?
Ammu ne uski aankhon me dekha… kuch bolne ki koshish ki, lekin lafzon ne saath nahi diya…
Uske aansuon ne pehle jawab diya.
Usne apne dono haath Arjun ke haathon me rakh diye…
Aur phir uski awaaz… halki, lekin bhari hui…
Ammu
Main tujhe…Main tujhe ab aur nahi khona chahti, Arjun.Tu sirf mera hai…
Arjun ka dil ek pal ke liye thama…
Usne ek gehri saans li… uski aankhon me ab tak ke saare pal ghoom gaye — rishton ka darr, apne hone ka dar, har wo lamha jahan Ammu ne sirf is rishte ko bachane ke liye khud ko dhoondha tha.
Usne turant paas padhe shawl ko uthaya…
Aur bade pyaar se, bade izzat se us shawl ko Ammu ke badan par wapas lapet diya…
Phir usne use apni baahon me le liya, is baar sirf mohabbat se nahi… ehteraam se.
Arjun
Tu meri zindagi hai, Ammu.
Main, meri saansein, meri dhadkan… sab kuch tu hai.
Ammu uski chhati se lagi… ab ro rahi thi… khul kar…
Lekin uske aansuon me darr nahi tha… relief tha.
Jaise saalon se jo dab ke rakha tha, aaj nikal gaya ho.
Arjun
Tu meri izzat hai, Ammu.
Mujhe teri zarurat hai… teri khoobsurti ki nahi.
Tere hone ki.
Ammu ne aankhon me aankhon daali… aur phir ek halka sa hans diya, us roti roti muskurahat ke beech…Wo pal… kisi wedding vow se kam nahi tha.
Camera piche zoom karta hai…
Raat ka ek hissa jaa chuka tha...
Room ke kone me halki si light ab bhi jal rahi thi… ek warm yellow tone me, jo sirf un dono ke aaspaas ki dunia roshan kar rahi thi.
Camera dheere se zoom karta hai...
Bed par Ammu aur Arjun blanket ke neeche, ek dusre ke saath... close, quiet, connected.
Ammu ne ab tak wahi shawl lapet rakha tha... sirf woh... uski khushboo me ab Arjun ke haath ki touch bhi shamil ho chuki thi.
Woh Arjun ke baahon me thi — spooning position me, Arjun uske piche, uski kamar par apna haath rakhkar dheere dheere ungliyon se uska haath thaam raha tha.
Ammu ki aankhein band thi… par uska chehra Arjun ke gale se touch ho raha tha… ek sukoon tha uski saanso me, lekin Arjun?
Arjun ab bhi fully woke... uski aankhon me har ek second, har ek touch ek alag hi feeling le kar aayi thi.
Arjun (uske kaan ke paas jhuk kar, halki muskaan ke saath)
Madam… ye jo aapka reward tha…
Thoda unexpected tha, par mazaa aaya…
Ammu (thoda sa hile, aankhein band rakhti hue)
Shhh… Arjun… so ja na…
Arjun
Main so jaun?
Itna sab kar diya… aur tu mujhe keh rahi hai so ja?
Itne garam mahol ke baad ab arjun ka lund jag chuka tha jo ammu ne bhi notice Kiya or cuddle karne ki wajah se uski ass par wo chubh sa raha tha lekin Ammu ab or kuch kehne ya karne ke mood me nahi thi, use bas apna arjun chahiye tha
Uska haath ab uski kamar ke thoda aur paas gaya… usne ammu ki body ko dheere se khinch kar apne aur kareeb kar liya.
Arjun (ab thoda naughty tone me)
Waise ek baat bolun…
Mujhe laga tha tu red colour wala set pehnegi…
Par ye wala... Love you Ammu
Ammu (ab thoda sa hansi rokte hue)
Shut up, Arjun…
Arjun
Kya shut up... ab to reward mil gaya, to review bhi milega…
Usne uske gale ke niche halka sa touch kiya... sirf ek second ke liye… aur fir wapas uska haath tightly pakad liya…
Ammu ne uske haath ko jhat se roka… lekin muskuraate hue.
Ammu ne ab pehli baar uska haath apne haathon me le liya…
Apne dil par rakh kar, sirf ek line boli…
Ammu
Tujhe jeetne ke liye… mujhe khud se ladna pada, Arjun.
Uska tone soft tha… lekin wo line Arjun ke dil me utar gayi.
Usne uske baalon me se thoda sir hata kar uske kaan ke paas ek halki si cheek press ki…
Arjun
Tu jeet gayi, Ammu.
Aur main… tujhme haar gaya.
Dono ab ek dusre me lipte hue… halki halki muskurahaton ke saath… neend ke ek pyare se jadoo me kho jaate hai.
Camera zoom out karta hai…
Kambal ke andar ek narm si halchal...
Kambal ke bahar ek chaand ki roshni…
Aur beech me... ek rishte ki jeet ka sukoon.
[b]Scene fade out.[/b]
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