17-07-2025, 03:52 PM
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Update 53
Qureshi House – Raat ka khana
Match ke baad ghar me ek halka sa excitement ka afterglow tha. Arjun aur Taz ki performance ne sabka mood fresh kar diya tha. Ab sab drawing room se dining area ki taraf shift ho gaye the.
Azhar saab ne jaate jaate ek baar peeche mur kar Shanu se kaha
Azhar
Beta... tum bhi kha lo humare saath. Raat bhi ho gayi hai.
Shanu thoda formally muskurayi
Shanu
Nahi uncle, main...
Azhar
Ammu aur Asma ko dekho... rotiyan bana rahi hain tumhare liye bhi. Beta, mehmaan jaise mat ban ke jao.
Zaheer kitchen ke corner se Shanu ko dekh raha tha — aankhon me wo silent approval tha jaise keh raha ho ruk jao... mere liye.
Shanu sir hilakar baith gayi, Zaheer ke bilkul opposite.
Table ke neeche dono ke pair itne kareeb the, jaise koi invisible taar ab khinch chuka ho.
Dining table pe:
Azhar saab center me, dono taraf Asma aur Shanu. Corner me Zaheer. Ammu abhi kitchen me hi thi, garam-garam rotiyaan belti hui.
Asma
Zaheer bhai, plate pass kar... chicken masala yaha tak aa nahi raha.
Zaheer ne plate pass karne ke bahane apna haath table ke neeche se kheechte hue, thoda sa sideways ghumaaya. Aur jaise hi uska haath Shanu ke thigh ke paas se guzra…
Shanu ki saans ek pal ke liye ruk gayi.
Usne apne pair thoda aur aage kiya — zaheer ne feel kar liya.
Table ke neeche pair ke saath pair takraate hain, kabhi lightly rub hote hain, kabhi jaan bujh kar touch zyada linger karta hai.
Ammu kitchen se roti le kar aayi, sabki plates me daalne lagi.
Ammu
Zaheer, garam roti hai... abhi kha le warna hard ho jayegi.
Zaheer
Haan... garam toh hai...
Uska tone halki si double meaning se bhara tha.
Shanu ne aankhon me ek light sa warning diya — lekin usme bhi ek smile chhupi thi.
Ammu aur Asma kitchen aur table ke beech ghoom rahi thi, isliye unka dhyaan nahi jaa raha tha lekin table ke neeche...
Shanu ne uska paanv heel se touch kiya, thoda press kiya.
Zaheer ne bina react kiye ek haath neeche laaya... aur uski thigh ke edge ko softly graze kiya.
Shanu ne turant ek spoon uthaya aur chicken masala ki taraf jhuk gayi, jaise kuch hua hi na ho — lekin uske kaan tak halka sa blush aa gaya tha.
Asma
Arrey Shanu, ye wali wali roti aur soft hai... tujhe pasand aayegi.
Shanu
Mujhe sab kuch soft pasand hai…
Zaheer ne halki si khansi ki —
Shayad mooh mein pani chala gaya tha...
ya Shanu ka jawab uski halat kharab kar gaya tha.
Azhar saab ne sabzi li, aur bina dekhe bola
Azhar
Ammu, namak perfect hai aaj. Bahut badiya.
Ammu
Thank you Abbu.
Zaheer table ke upar se ek glance me Shanu ko dekhta hai,
aur aankhon se puchta hai ab?
Shanu slow blink deti hai,
aur uska haath plate ke neeche, table cloth ke andar quietly stretch hota hai — zaheer ki fingers dhundhta hua.
Touch milta hai.
Dono haathon ke beech me ek second ka squeeze.
Room me sab kuch normal lagta hai.
Lekin unke beech... ek aag chal rahi thi.
Ammu ka bedroom – Raat ka waqt
Dinner ho chuka tha.Ammu bhi apne room me aa chuki thi,Room ki yellow light uske skin pe warm glow de rahi thi. Mirror ke saamne khadi, usne apne long earrings nikaale, phir dresser ki taraf jaa kar apna wardrobe drawer khola.
Andar neatly folded kapdon ke beech ek purse rakha tha
Camera close-up: Uske fingers purse ke andar se kuch dhoondhti hain…
Aur tab... Ek silky black Kapda nikalti hai — smooth satin jaisa, halka sa lace edge. Jaise koi special cheez ho.
Uski aankhon me ek secret si muskaan aati hai. Chehra zoom hota hai.
Flashback begins
Kitchen me ammu ka ek whatsapp massage or uske baad sidha collage scene
Cut to: College canteen – Afternoon
Ammu ek quiet bench pe baithi hoti hai jab Priya apne bag se ek tiny gift-wrapped pouch nikaal kar uski taraf slide karti hai.
Priya
Ja… jaisa tune bola tha… exact waise hi. Aur warna koi itna precise order nahi deta… chal ab maze kar.
Flashback ends.
Wapas Ammu ke room me.
Uske haath me ab bhi wo black lace wala kapda tha.
Usne use apne cheeks pe softly rub kiya, phir neatly fold kar ke wapas purse me rakha.
Mirror me apne reflection ko dekha —
Aur aankhon me khud se ek sawal tha…
"Kya aaj raat... kuch badal sakta hai?"
Ammu’s Room – Same Night (Shortly After)
Camera slow zoom karta hai Ammu ke mirror reflection se, jahan woh khud ko dekh ke blush kar rahi hoti hai. Lekin is baar uski aankhon mein sirf shyness nahi… kuch daring hai. Kuch mischievous.
Ammu ka chat box khula hai.
Uski ungli ek second ke liye rukti hai… sochti hai. Fir ek text type karti hai:
"Wait for my next reward… this one, you’ll remember forever."
Send.
Woh phone side mein rakhti hai… phir thoda walk karti hai room mein, jaise kuch plan kar rahi ho. Phir ekdum ruk jaati hai.
Ammu
(andar hi andar bold tone mein)
Tu har baar maangta hai… ab main bhi kuch maangti hoon.
Woh priya ka diya hua shrugg nikalti hai,black silky shrugg or uske andar black bra already pehna hota hai woh shrug us par daalti hai. Phir ek soft pink lipstick lagati hai. Hair dryer se apne baal thode aur bouncey karti hai… aur fir apne phone ke front camera ke saamne aake khadi ho jaati hai.
Ek hand waist pe, dusra apne collarbone ke paas — halki si neckline dikh rahi hai. Lips slightly parted. Uska cleavage or wo black tight bra behad kamuk or sexy lag raha tha, scene me ammu ka bas half face cover hota hai
Ek photo click. Phir ek aur.
Phir woh phone uthati hai… aur short 5-second ka video banati hai — jisme woh sirf apne baal ek side karti hai, shoulder highlight karti hai, aur whisper karti hai
This one’s not just for your eyes, it’s for your dreams too…
Woh video ko review karti hai — thoda blush karti hai — thoda proud expression bhi aata hai.
Caption likhti hai:
"Your 4th reward, Mr. Champion Singh. Earn the 5th in style."
Send.
Ek lambi saans leti hai, phone ko rakhti hai aur bed pe gir jaati hai, face pe blush aur aankhon mein excitement. Lights band karne se pehle woh bolti hai…
Ammu
(teasing tone mein)
Dekhte hain ab kis ka bold level zyada hai… Singh ya Siddiqui?
Jodhpur – Tournament night – Arjun’s hotel room – 12:23 AM
Room andhera tha, sirf ek table lamp ka mellow sa glow tha jo Arjun ke face ko highlight kar raha tha.
Woh freshly showered tha — towel se baal sukha raha tha, aur ek light grey t-shirt pehni thi.
Bed ke kone par uska phone pada tha — silent mode me, lekin screen blink kar rahi thi.
Usne phone uthaya —
Notification: Ammu ? sent a photo
Caption: "Reward… jaise waada kiya tha."
Arjun ka saans ek pal ke liye ruk gaya.
Usne dheere se screen tap ki…
Aur image slowly open hoti hai.
Selfie: Ammu in her room – soft yellow light – black satin shrugg pehna hua, jo thoda sa slid off shoulder hai. Hair loose. Eyes soft but bold. Lips pe ek faint sa smile — jaise keh rahi ho, ‘bas dekh… aur samajh ja.’
Back to Arjun.
Uska gala dry ho gaya.
Woh screen se aankh nahi hata pa raha tha.
Halki si hansi uske chehre pe aayi — stunned but touched.
Arjun
(softly, phone ki screen ko dekhte hue)
Tere jaise reward… zindagi me sirf ek baar milta hai.
Usne phone ko chest pe rakha, back pe gir gaya bed pe. Ceiling ki taraf dekhte hue…
Aankhon me wohi ladki thi — jisne usse ignore kiya, ladayi ki, fir maaf kiya… aur ab bina ek shabd bole, uske dil ke andar kuch ignite kar diya.
Uska next instinct — message type karne ka hota hai.
Typing...
Phir delete kar diya.
Usne bas ek reply bheja:
Aur message ke baad usne ek kiss emoji bhej di — bas ek.
Screen off.
Room me sirf ek uski muskaan thi… aur us selfie ka ehsaas —
jo koi trophy se kam nahi tha.
College parking area – Subah ka waqt – 9:05 AM
Subah ki halki dhoop thi. Campus abhi puri tarah jag nahi paaya tha. Bikes aur scooters ki lines ke beech ek kone me Ammu aur Priya khadi thi.
Ammu ne apne tote bag me haath daala — aur quietly ek folded black kapda nikaala.
Wahi shrugg.
Usne discreetly Priya ke haath me diya — jaise koi smuggled maal handover kar raha ho.
Ammu
Lo... waapas.
Priya ne kapda liya, uska texture fingers me feel kiya — phir nazar uthayi.
Priya
Oho... perfume ki khushboo abhi tak iss pe hai.
Matlab... use toh hui hai. Aur properly hui hai.
Ammu ne aankh ghumaayi — sharmate hue ek fake stern tone me boli
Ammu
Bas kar Priya... tujhe maine trust karke liya tha, lecture mat shuru kar.
Priya ne thoda lean karke cheeky tone me pucha
Priya
Toh bataa... reaction kaisa tha?
Ammu ne shoulder se apne baal piche kiye. Lips pe ek controlled smile thi, lekin aankhon me spark.
Ammu
Waisa hi... jaise socha tha.
Silent. Stunned. Aur… reply mein bas ek kiss emoji.
Priya ki aankhein wide ho gayi
Priya
Ooooofffff! Emoji level tak chale gaye ho tum log
Waise bhi, tere jaisi ladki jab bold hoti hai na… toh samne wale ki ruh tak hil jaati hai.
Ammu
Main bold nahi thi…
Main just... clear thi. Mujhe pata tha mujhe kya karna hai.
Priya impressed expression banati hai
Priya
Queen behaviour.
Waise next time... red lace try kar. Firestarter category hoti hai wo.
Ammu ne shrugg lautate ek warning glare diya
Ammu
Next time ke liye planning tere paas mat rakh…
warna mujhe blush karte dekh tune video bana diya toh?
Priya
Arey blush toh tu abhi bhi kar rahi hai!
Dono hansi rokti hain.
Tabhi bell bajti hai — pehla lecture start hone ka signal.
Ammu ne baal adjust kiye, lips pe thoda gloss lagaya, aur halki confident walk ke saath canteen block ki taraf badh gayi.
Priya peeche se bolti hai:
Priya
Aur haan… agar usne tujhe milne bulaya na… toh shrugg mat pehn lena.
Is baar... kuch aur hi hona chahiye.
Ammu bina murhe, sirf ek smile deti hai —
jaise keh rahi ho... "We'll see."
Jodhpur Stadium – Practice Day – 10:17 AM
Sunlight ground ke upar golden mist ki tarah bikhi thi. Players warm-up kar rahe the. Coach instructions de raha tha, cones set ho rahe the sprint drills ke liye.
Arjun ground ke ek kone me khada tha, hands on hips, breath steady…
Lekin nazar kahi aur thi.
Uska team bib uski skin se chipak gaya tha, halke paseene se. Par uske mathe pe jo tension thi, wo kisi aur cheez ka naam le rahi thi.
Taz uske paas aaya, elbow se thoda bump deta hai
Taz
Arey hero… kya scene hai? Tujhe toh maine kabhi itna daydreaming mode me nahi dekha…
Arjun ek dum jhatka le kar react karta hai, jaise neend se jaga ho
Arjun
Kuch nahi… thoda late soya tha, bas…
Taz
Late? Ya kisi ne late night reward bhej diya tha?
Arjun ka expression ek pal ke liye freeze hota hai.
Aur phir… flashback style me uska dimaag us image me wapas chala jaata hai.
Flash (No dialogue):
Ammu — black shrugg, shoulder se halka sa slip, eyes locked on the camera, uska cheek ka glow…
Aur us message ka caption: "Reward... jaise waada kiya tha."
Arjun ki aankhon me woh image wapas chamak jaati hai — ekdum clear, jaise abhi bhi screen pe ho.
Uska gale me kuch atak gaya tha.
Usne bottle uthayi, ek sip liya — lekin uski aankhen ab ground par nahi, Ammu ke chehre par thi — dimaag ke andar.
Coach ki awaaz background me sunayi deti hai
Coach
Sprint line! Left to right full pace, no drop! Arjun, you lead.
Arjun apne senses me laut kar sprint position me aata hai.
Aur phir woh bhaagta hai.
Lekin jaise har kadam ke saath uske dimaag me ek line gunj rahi ho:
Ammu mujhe dekh rahi thi.
Ammu ne khud mujhe choose kiya.
Ammu... meri hai.
Sprint ke beech me Arjun ka focus phir se hilta hai
Uske steps waver karte hain, lekin wo khud ko sambhal leta hai.
Run complete karne ke baad, thoda breathing heavy ho jaata hai.
Coach uski taraf dekhta hai — confusion se.
Coach
Tu thik hai? Nazar lag gayi kya kisi ki?
Arjun halki si muskurahat ke saath sirf itna bolta hai:
Arjun
Nazar nahi sir…
bas ek tasveer hai… jo dimaag se jaa nahi rahi.
Coach kuch samajh nahi pata — lekin Taz piche se smirk maar deta hai
Taz
Ammu ji ka kaam lagta hai.
Arjun aankhon me ek warning look deta hai
Arjun
Naam mat le uska…
abhi bhi body heat nahi normal hui hai.
Taz phir bhi bolta hai
Taz
Lagta hai bhai, tu khud se nahi… uski aankhon se jeet gaya hai.
Scene slow fade out hoti hai — Arjun ke face pe ek soft confident smile ke saath.
[b][b]Uska match ab ground pe nahi… [b]dil me chal raha tha.[/b][/b][/b]
Qureshi House – Raat ka khana
Match ke baad ghar me ek halka sa excitement ka afterglow tha. Arjun aur Taz ki performance ne sabka mood fresh kar diya tha. Ab sab drawing room se dining area ki taraf shift ho gaye the.
Azhar saab ne jaate jaate ek baar peeche mur kar Shanu se kaha
Azhar
Beta... tum bhi kha lo humare saath. Raat bhi ho gayi hai.
Shanu thoda formally muskurayi
Shanu
Nahi uncle, main...
Azhar
Ammu aur Asma ko dekho... rotiyan bana rahi hain tumhare liye bhi. Beta, mehmaan jaise mat ban ke jao.
Zaheer kitchen ke corner se Shanu ko dekh raha tha — aankhon me wo silent approval tha jaise keh raha ho ruk jao... mere liye.
Shanu sir hilakar baith gayi, Zaheer ke bilkul opposite.
Table ke neeche dono ke pair itne kareeb the, jaise koi invisible taar ab khinch chuka ho.
Dining table pe:
Azhar saab center me, dono taraf Asma aur Shanu. Corner me Zaheer. Ammu abhi kitchen me hi thi, garam-garam rotiyaan belti hui.
Asma
Zaheer bhai, plate pass kar... chicken masala yaha tak aa nahi raha.
Zaheer ne plate pass karne ke bahane apna haath table ke neeche se kheechte hue, thoda sa sideways ghumaaya. Aur jaise hi uska haath Shanu ke thigh ke paas se guzra…
Shanu ki saans ek pal ke liye ruk gayi.
Usne apne pair thoda aur aage kiya — zaheer ne feel kar liya.
Table ke neeche pair ke saath pair takraate hain, kabhi lightly rub hote hain, kabhi jaan bujh kar touch zyada linger karta hai.
Ammu kitchen se roti le kar aayi, sabki plates me daalne lagi.
Ammu
Zaheer, garam roti hai... abhi kha le warna hard ho jayegi.
Zaheer
Haan... garam toh hai...
Uska tone halki si double meaning se bhara tha.
Shanu ne aankhon me ek light sa warning diya — lekin usme bhi ek smile chhupi thi.
Ammu aur Asma kitchen aur table ke beech ghoom rahi thi, isliye unka dhyaan nahi jaa raha tha lekin table ke neeche...
Shanu ne uska paanv heel se touch kiya, thoda press kiya.
Zaheer ne bina react kiye ek haath neeche laaya... aur uski thigh ke edge ko softly graze kiya.
Shanu ne turant ek spoon uthaya aur chicken masala ki taraf jhuk gayi, jaise kuch hua hi na ho — lekin uske kaan tak halka sa blush aa gaya tha.
Asma
Arrey Shanu, ye wali wali roti aur soft hai... tujhe pasand aayegi.
Shanu
Mujhe sab kuch soft pasand hai…
Zaheer ne halki si khansi ki —
Shayad mooh mein pani chala gaya tha...
ya Shanu ka jawab uski halat kharab kar gaya tha.
Azhar saab ne sabzi li, aur bina dekhe bola
Azhar
Ammu, namak perfect hai aaj. Bahut badiya.
Ammu
Thank you Abbu.
Zaheer table ke upar se ek glance me Shanu ko dekhta hai,
aur aankhon se puchta hai ab?
Shanu slow blink deti hai,
aur uska haath plate ke neeche, table cloth ke andar quietly stretch hota hai — zaheer ki fingers dhundhta hua.
Touch milta hai.
Dono haathon ke beech me ek second ka squeeze.
Room me sab kuch normal lagta hai.
Lekin unke beech... ek aag chal rahi thi.
Ammu ka bedroom – Raat ka waqt
Dinner ho chuka tha.Ammu bhi apne room me aa chuki thi,Room ki yellow light uske skin pe warm glow de rahi thi. Mirror ke saamne khadi, usne apne long earrings nikaale, phir dresser ki taraf jaa kar apna wardrobe drawer khola.
Andar neatly folded kapdon ke beech ek purse rakha tha
Camera close-up: Uske fingers purse ke andar se kuch dhoondhti hain…
Aur tab... Ek silky black Kapda nikalti hai — smooth satin jaisa, halka sa lace edge. Jaise koi special cheez ho.
Uski aankhon me ek secret si muskaan aati hai. Chehra zoom hota hai.
Flashback begins
Kitchen me ammu ka ek whatsapp massage or uske baad sidha collage scene
Cut to: College canteen – Afternoon
Ammu ek quiet bench pe baithi hoti hai jab Priya apne bag se ek tiny gift-wrapped pouch nikaal kar uski taraf slide karti hai.
Priya
Ja… jaisa tune bola tha… exact waise hi. Aur warna koi itna precise order nahi deta… chal ab maze kar.
Flashback ends.
Wapas Ammu ke room me.
Uske haath me ab bhi wo black lace wala kapda tha.
Usne use apne cheeks pe softly rub kiya, phir neatly fold kar ke wapas purse me rakha.
Mirror me apne reflection ko dekha —
Aur aankhon me khud se ek sawal tha…
"Kya aaj raat... kuch badal sakta hai?"
Ammu’s Room – Same Night (Shortly After)
Camera slow zoom karta hai Ammu ke mirror reflection se, jahan woh khud ko dekh ke blush kar rahi hoti hai. Lekin is baar uski aankhon mein sirf shyness nahi… kuch daring hai. Kuch mischievous.
Ammu ka chat box khula hai.
Uski ungli ek second ke liye rukti hai… sochti hai. Fir ek text type karti hai:
"Wait for my next reward… this one, you’ll remember forever."
Send.
Woh phone side mein rakhti hai… phir thoda walk karti hai room mein, jaise kuch plan kar rahi ho. Phir ekdum ruk jaati hai.
Ammu
(andar hi andar bold tone mein)
Tu har baar maangta hai… ab main bhi kuch maangti hoon.
Woh priya ka diya hua shrugg nikalti hai,black silky shrugg or uske andar black bra already pehna hota hai woh shrug us par daalti hai. Phir ek soft pink lipstick lagati hai. Hair dryer se apne baal thode aur bouncey karti hai… aur fir apne phone ke front camera ke saamne aake khadi ho jaati hai.
Ek hand waist pe, dusra apne collarbone ke paas — halki si neckline dikh rahi hai. Lips slightly parted. Uska cleavage or wo black tight bra behad kamuk or sexy lag raha tha, scene me ammu ka bas half face cover hota hai
Ek photo click. Phir ek aur.
Phir woh phone uthati hai… aur short 5-second ka video banati hai — jisme woh sirf apne baal ek side karti hai, shoulder highlight karti hai, aur whisper karti hai
This one’s not just for your eyes, it’s for your dreams too…
Woh video ko review karti hai — thoda blush karti hai — thoda proud expression bhi aata hai.
Caption likhti hai:
"Your 4th reward, Mr. Champion Singh. Earn the 5th in style."
Send.
Ek lambi saans leti hai, phone ko rakhti hai aur bed pe gir jaati hai, face pe blush aur aankhon mein excitement. Lights band karne se pehle woh bolti hai…
Ammu
(teasing tone mein)
Dekhte hain ab kis ka bold level zyada hai… Singh ya Siddiqui?
Jodhpur – Tournament night – Arjun’s hotel room – 12:23 AM
Room andhera tha, sirf ek table lamp ka mellow sa glow tha jo Arjun ke face ko highlight kar raha tha.
Woh freshly showered tha — towel se baal sukha raha tha, aur ek light grey t-shirt pehni thi.
Bed ke kone par uska phone pada tha — silent mode me, lekin screen blink kar rahi thi.
Usne phone uthaya —
Notification: Ammu ? sent a photo
Caption: "Reward… jaise waada kiya tha."
Arjun ka saans ek pal ke liye ruk gaya.
Usne dheere se screen tap ki…
Aur image slowly open hoti hai.
Selfie: Ammu in her room – soft yellow light – black satin shrugg pehna hua, jo thoda sa slid off shoulder hai. Hair loose. Eyes soft but bold. Lips pe ek faint sa smile — jaise keh rahi ho, ‘bas dekh… aur samajh ja.’
Back to Arjun.
Uska gala dry ho gaya.
Woh screen se aankh nahi hata pa raha tha.
Halki si hansi uske chehre pe aayi — stunned but touched.
Arjun
(softly, phone ki screen ko dekhte hue)
Tere jaise reward… zindagi me sirf ek baar milta hai.
Usne phone ko chest pe rakha, back pe gir gaya bed pe. Ceiling ki taraf dekhte hue…
Aankhon me wohi ladki thi — jisne usse ignore kiya, ladayi ki, fir maaf kiya… aur ab bina ek shabd bole, uske dil ke andar kuch ignite kar diya.
Uska next instinct — message type karne ka hota hai.
Typing...
Quote:"Tumhare bina sab kuch adhoora lagta hai. Aaj match jeeta... lekin jeet to tab lagi jab tumhara message aaya."
Phir delete kar diya.
Usne bas ek reply bheja:
Quote:"I’ll keep winning… bas tu dekhte rehna."
Aur message ke baad usne ek kiss emoji bhej di — bas ek.
Screen off.
Room me sirf ek uski muskaan thi… aur us selfie ka ehsaas —
jo koi trophy se kam nahi tha.
College parking area – Subah ka waqt – 9:05 AM
Subah ki halki dhoop thi. Campus abhi puri tarah jag nahi paaya tha. Bikes aur scooters ki lines ke beech ek kone me Ammu aur Priya khadi thi.
Ammu ne apne tote bag me haath daala — aur quietly ek folded black kapda nikaala.
Wahi shrugg.
Usne discreetly Priya ke haath me diya — jaise koi smuggled maal handover kar raha ho.
Ammu
Lo... waapas.
Priya ne kapda liya, uska texture fingers me feel kiya — phir nazar uthayi.
Priya
Oho... perfume ki khushboo abhi tak iss pe hai.
Matlab... use toh hui hai. Aur properly hui hai.
Ammu ne aankh ghumaayi — sharmate hue ek fake stern tone me boli
Ammu
Bas kar Priya... tujhe maine trust karke liya tha, lecture mat shuru kar.
Priya ne thoda lean karke cheeky tone me pucha
Priya
Toh bataa... reaction kaisa tha?
Ammu ne shoulder se apne baal piche kiye. Lips pe ek controlled smile thi, lekin aankhon me spark.
Ammu
Waisa hi... jaise socha tha.
Silent. Stunned. Aur… reply mein bas ek kiss emoji.
Priya ki aankhein wide ho gayi
Priya
Ooooofffff! Emoji level tak chale gaye ho tum log
Waise bhi, tere jaisi ladki jab bold hoti hai na… toh samne wale ki ruh tak hil jaati hai.
Ammu
Main bold nahi thi…
Main just... clear thi. Mujhe pata tha mujhe kya karna hai.
Priya impressed expression banati hai
Priya
Queen behaviour.
Waise next time... red lace try kar. Firestarter category hoti hai wo.
Ammu ne shrugg lautate ek warning glare diya
Ammu
Next time ke liye planning tere paas mat rakh…
warna mujhe blush karte dekh tune video bana diya toh?
Priya
Arey blush toh tu abhi bhi kar rahi hai!
Dono hansi rokti hain.
Tabhi bell bajti hai — pehla lecture start hone ka signal.
Ammu ne baal adjust kiye, lips pe thoda gloss lagaya, aur halki confident walk ke saath canteen block ki taraf badh gayi.
Priya peeche se bolti hai:
Priya
Aur haan… agar usne tujhe milne bulaya na… toh shrugg mat pehn lena.
Is baar... kuch aur hi hona chahiye.
Ammu bina murhe, sirf ek smile deti hai —
jaise keh rahi ho... "We'll see."
Jodhpur Stadium – Practice Day – 10:17 AM
Sunlight ground ke upar golden mist ki tarah bikhi thi. Players warm-up kar rahe the. Coach instructions de raha tha, cones set ho rahe the sprint drills ke liye.
Arjun ground ke ek kone me khada tha, hands on hips, breath steady…
Lekin nazar kahi aur thi.
Uska team bib uski skin se chipak gaya tha, halke paseene se. Par uske mathe pe jo tension thi, wo kisi aur cheez ka naam le rahi thi.
Taz uske paas aaya, elbow se thoda bump deta hai
Taz
Arey hero… kya scene hai? Tujhe toh maine kabhi itna daydreaming mode me nahi dekha…
Arjun ek dum jhatka le kar react karta hai, jaise neend se jaga ho
Arjun
Kuch nahi… thoda late soya tha, bas…
Taz
Late? Ya kisi ne late night reward bhej diya tha?
Arjun ka expression ek pal ke liye freeze hota hai.
Aur phir… flashback style me uska dimaag us image me wapas chala jaata hai.
Flash (No dialogue):
Ammu — black shrugg, shoulder se halka sa slip, eyes locked on the camera, uska cheek ka glow…
Aur us message ka caption: "Reward... jaise waada kiya tha."
Arjun ki aankhon me woh image wapas chamak jaati hai — ekdum clear, jaise abhi bhi screen pe ho.
Uska gale me kuch atak gaya tha.
Usne bottle uthayi, ek sip liya — lekin uski aankhen ab ground par nahi, Ammu ke chehre par thi — dimaag ke andar.
Coach ki awaaz background me sunayi deti hai
Coach
Sprint line! Left to right full pace, no drop! Arjun, you lead.
Arjun apne senses me laut kar sprint position me aata hai.
Aur phir woh bhaagta hai.
Lekin jaise har kadam ke saath uske dimaag me ek line gunj rahi ho:
Ammu mujhe dekh rahi thi.
Ammu ne khud mujhe choose kiya.
Ammu... meri hai.
Sprint ke beech me Arjun ka focus phir se hilta hai
Uske steps waver karte hain, lekin wo khud ko sambhal leta hai.
Run complete karne ke baad, thoda breathing heavy ho jaata hai.
Coach uski taraf dekhta hai — confusion se.
Coach
Tu thik hai? Nazar lag gayi kya kisi ki?
Arjun halki si muskurahat ke saath sirf itna bolta hai:
Arjun
Nazar nahi sir…
bas ek tasveer hai… jo dimaag se jaa nahi rahi.
Coach kuch samajh nahi pata — lekin Taz piche se smirk maar deta hai
Taz
Ammu ji ka kaam lagta hai.
Arjun aankhon me ek warning look deta hai
Arjun
Naam mat le uska…
abhi bhi body heat nahi normal hui hai.
Taz phir bhi bolta hai
Taz
Lagta hai bhai, tu khud se nahi… uski aankhon se jeet gaya hai.
Scene slow fade out hoti hai — Arjun ke face pe ek soft confident smile ke saath.
[b][b]Uska match ab ground pe nahi… [b]dil me chal raha tha.[/b][/b][/b]
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