Adultery Priya Didi

[Raj087]

Beautifully written... everything seems so real. The way you described the scenes of dinner was as if everyone reading could actually see it in front of their eyes. To add more elegance and realism please describe the fullness of Priya s Belly under saree after the elegant dinner. How Ravi would be mesmarised by her fullness and how Priya elegantly displayed it. If possible add few conversation from Priya about the heavy meal which draws Ravi attention towards her fullness and dinner bloat which looks mesmarising with her beautiful saree. Its just a suggestion but i think it will add realism and elangance to your plot. Think about it...but i must say you are brilliant.....