Adultery Priya Didi

[shailu4ever]

You are simply brilliant in your writing style..I cannot Stop to appreciate you...the Way you described priya in saree was like i can see her infornt of my eyes without even imagining it was so Vivid yet so mysterious...i know you have your own plans to describe her furthermore but Just a small suggestion how elegantly her Belly looks after a heavy Dinner...as she is in saree it would be asthetically beautiful to describe her heavy Dinner bloat in saree..the fullness it gains after meal visible though her saree. Also if you ask my suggestion you can introduce Neetu as someone who is having a western style as she stayed long in western Europe or USA to contrast the indian elegance...just think over it....

Hi raj087

Thank you so much! Your message honestly made my day. 

I'm really happy you enjoyed the way Priya was described, it’s great to hear that the scene felt so vivid and real to you.

And I love your suggestions! The idea of highlighting that post-dinner fullness subtly through the saree is actually quite a beautiful visual detail.

I'll definitely think about how to weave that in naturally. 

Also, introducing Neetu with a Western touch to contrast Priya’s traditional vibe sounds like a really fun dynamic to explore. 

The upcoming scene I already wrote it.  I’ll definitely keep that in mind as the story progresses. I will introduce some character in western touch.

Thanks again for taking the time to share your thoughts in such detail!

Really appreciate you for your thoughtful feedback!

With warm regards

-- Shailu

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