15-07-2025, 08:25 PM
You are simply brilliant in your writing style..I cannot Stop to appreciate you...the Way you described priya in saree was like i can see her infornt of my eyes without even imagining it was so Vivid yet so mysterious...i know you have your own plans to describe her furthermore but Just a small suggestion how elegantly her Belly looks after a heavy Dinner...as she is in saree it would be asthetically beautiful to describe her heavy Dinner bloat in saree..the fullness it gains after meal visible though her saree. Also if you ask my suggestion you can introduce Neetu as someone who is having a western style as she stayed long in western Europe or USA to contrast the indian elegance...just think over it....