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Update 45
Saturday Night — Tease Begins
Shanu or zaheer ki random chat or shanu ka teasing ki lagta hai kisi boring aadmi se pala pad gaya, main usse pyaar karti hu yeh jaan kar bhi koi huge reaction nahi
Zaheer ek pal ke liye sochta hai ki boring hu ya roaring wo to tujhe pata chalega kudiye...
Zaheer apne bed pe late message bhejta hai
“Kal tayyar rehna…
Shanu mobile screen ghoorti hai aankhon mein sparkle, chehre pe blush. She whispers to herself:
“Kya plan hai is Zaheer ka…?”
Cut to:
Ammu diary likh rahi hoti hai. Tabhi ek chhoti si vibration.
Arjun ka text
Woh set lene aa jaaun kal? Mera sabr toh khatam ho gaya hai.” ?
Ammu smirks:
Aaja… dekhte hain kitni himmat hai arjun Singh mein.”
? Sunday Morning — Romance in Motion
?Scene 1: Zaheer & Shanu’s Ride — Streets of Jaipur
BGM: “Ilahi mera jee aaye…” (Slow acoustic version)
Zaheer gali ke corner pe khada hota hai, denim jacket mein — helmet ek haath mein, dusra phone par.
Shanu jaise hi turn leke aati hai, Zaheer ki aankhen freeze ho jaati hain — ek pink printed kurti mein, loose braid, subtle earrings… sunlight uske face pe padti hai.
Zaheer (softly):
“Chal, Jaipur ko dikhaate hain pyaar ka meaning.”
? Bike Ride Begins
Shanu thoda hesitant hoti hai peechhe baithne mein — lekin
Zaheer back mirror mein dekhta hai
“Dar mat… main hoon na.
”
Bike Jaipur ki narrow galiyon se nikalti hai, hawa zyada baat karti hai dono ke beech.Zaheer mirror se Shanu ka reflection observe karta hai uski muskurahat, uski aankhen, uska khul ke hansna.
Zaheer
POV:
Kaise keh doon… ki tu meri ho chuki hai?”
Scene 2: Jal Mahal ke paas pit stop
Lake ke kinare dono chai leke baithte hain.
Zaheer casually:
“Tujhe jab dekhta hoon na… lagta hai main kabhi bura ho hi nahi sa
kta.”
Shanu blush karti hai:
“Aur jab main tujhe dekhti hoon… lagta hai tu kuch bol kyun nahi
deta!”
Zaheer sirf aankhon se baat karta hai. Kya kehna zaroori bhi hai?
Camera pulls back, Jaipur ka skyline, lake ka reflection, aur un dono ki hansi — background mein “Raat bhar…” ka instrumental chalu hota hai
Location: Ammu ka ghar – Sunday morning
Time: 11:30 AM
Setting: Kitchen – sunlight ek kone se aa rahi hai, stove pe sabzi ka tadka chadh raha hai, Ammu halke cotton ka dupatta lapet ke kaam mein lagi hai.
Ammu (mind mein, wooden spoon ghoomate hue):
"Aaj aayega kya... ya sirf hawa mein baatein hi karta rahega."
Thoda rukti hai, uske chehre pe ek doubtful expression.
"Waise bhi... agar itni himmat hoti, toh ab tak propose toh kar hi chuka hota."
She smirks.
Halki si hasi — jaise Arjun ke naam par hansna uski aadat ban gayi ho.
Phir se stove ki taraf mudh jaati hai, coriander ka bunch todti hai, spoon se gravy check karti hai.
Usi waqt...
? "THUDH!"
Ek halki si thap jaisi aawaz — jaise koi roof ke ek kone par land hua ho.
Asma (living room se):
Ammu! Oye… yeh kya aawaz aayi chhat se? Koi bandar toh nahi?”
Ammu ka haath freeze ho jaata hai spoon ke upar.Uske dil ki heartbeat ekdum sharp ho jaati hai.
Ammu (mind mein):
"Yeh toh wahi hai… pagal kahin ka"
She tries to keep a straight face…lekin aankhon mein ek alag si chamak aa gayi hai.
Ammu (casually Asma se):
“Tu yeh sabzi dekh na ek second… main chek karke aati hu, zaheer ke saman hai chhat par
Asma (confused)
“Abhi? Aise?
”
Ammu
“Haan haan... main bas aayi.”
Ammu dupatta set karti hai, spoon side rakhti hai, gas ki flame low karti hai —aur halki kadam leke inner stairs ki taraf badh jaati hai.
Uska chehra serious dikh raha hota hai… lekin andar se ek ajeeb sa sukoon aur excitement ka milan hota hai.
(Camera POV: Ammu jaise hi chhat ke door tak pahuchti hai… ek halki si breeze uske face par aati hai… aur uske chehre pe ek anticipation ka layer chhup nahi pata.)
Cut To: Masala Chowk, Jaipur — 12:15 PM
BGM: “Raabta (Acoustic)” ya koi soft lo-fi instrumental
Sunlight filtered through tree leaves, stalls se uthta masale bhara dhuan, logon ki halki bheed — aur un sab ke beech… Shanu, ek alag si roshni mein chamak rahi hoti hai.
?️ Zaheer POV — Slow Motion
Camera: Handheld, cinematic zoom-ins, dreamy filters
Zaheer uske thoda peeche chal raha hota hai haath jeans ke pocket mein, aankhen sirf ek jagah focus:
Shanu.
“Yeh ladki... jaise jaise chalti hai... waqt rukh jata hai.”
Shanu’s Details — POV Shot
Jhumke:
Uske chandi ke oxidised jhumke halki halki hil rahe hain har kadam ke saath. Jab bhi woh muskurati hai, jhumke cheek ke paas tak aa jaate hain — jaise uski hansi ka music ho.
Locket:
Gale mein ek thin silver chain — usme ek chhota sa heart-shape locket. Kabhi dupatta ke neeche chhup jaata hai, kabhi hawa mein dikh jaata hai. Zaheer ki aankhon ne use chhupte-dikhte pakad liya hai.
Baal:
Khule, soft curls — halki halki hawa mein ud rahe hain. Jab woh stall ke paas jhukti hai toh ek curl uske cheek ko chhoo jata hai.
Zaheer dil hi dil mein:
“Sala curl ban ke cheek ban jaun ek minute ke liye.”
Aankhein:
Kabhi chaat mein mirch zyada ho jaati hai, toh woh aankhein bandh karke “ufff!” karti hai. Zaheer ke liye woh “uff” duniya ki sabse khoobsurat sound hoti hai.
Un aankhon mein ek sparkle hai… curiosity, masti, aur thoda zaheer ke liye soft corner bhi.
Scene Continue: Chaat Tasting
Shanu
Yeh dekho zaheer… yeh dahi puri try kari tune kabhi?”
(Uska haath zaheer ki taraf badhta hai, ek puri leke)
“Muh khol beta… thoda kha ke toh dekh!
Zaheer awkward sa karta hai, par muh kholta hai.
As soon as he eats — mirchi hit!
Zaheer:
“Aaaaaa bhains ki aankh yeh kya tha! Lava daala tha kya?”
Shanu (laughing):
“Mirchi ke bina chaat kya, zaheer? Tu toh baccha nikla!”
She walks ahead, dupatta thoda udta hai, uska laughter hawa mein mix hota hai.Zaheer slow steps mein chalta hai uske peechhe — ek dum focused, ek dum silenced.
Zaheer (mind mein, thoda huskily):
“Tu chaat kha rahi hai… aur main tujhmein ulajhta ja raha
hoon…”
Camera upar jaata hai — stall ke canopy ke upar se Shanu frame ke left mein, full of energy.Zaheer frame ke right mein, still par aankhon se sab keh raha.
Cut to blur.
BGM slow fade-out.
Time: 11:45 AM
Location: Ammu ka ghar – chhat
Background: Neeche kitchen se masalon ki khushboo aa rahi hai, lekin upar sab kuch ekdum silent... ek tension bhari sweetness ke saath.
Ammu, stairs se upar dabe paaon chadhi — uske anklet ki halki chhan-chhan bhi chup rahi ho jaise koi na sun le.Dupatta se thoda face dhaka hua, aankhon mein anticipation... lekin lips pe woh “main kyun aa rahi hoon” wala denial-smile.
Ammu (mind mein):
"Pata nahi kis din chhat se neeche seedha shaadi ka card leke kud jaaye ye pagal."
Just as she steps onto the terrace...
Suddenly from behind — Arjun.
Arjun:
“Pakad liya!”
(Uski kamar ke around dono haath, ek tight hug — face uske kaandhe ke paas)
Ammu:
Arjun! Pagal ho gaya hai kya?!”
(Thoda jhatakta hai, struggle karti hai... lekin uski hassi chhup nahi paati)
Arjun (smiling, uske ear ke paas softly)
“Aaj toh tujhe bina bole hug mil gaya... progress ho rahi hai.
Ammu:
“Hatt! Main teri progress ka record tod doongi agar aur cheesy line boli toh.”
(Thoda zor se uske haath hata ke seedhi hoti hai... lekin aankhon mein sparkle hai)
Arjun:
“Toh madam, ab jo main lene aaya hoon… woh de do... warna agle Sunday tak chhat ki deewar phandta rahunga.”
(Uski aankhon mein full mischief
Ammu:
“Yeh tu kaunsa treasure le raha hai baar baar?”
(arms cross karti hai, uske saamne khadi ho jaati hai)
Arjun (thoda na khra se):
“Woh maroon set… last time ka toh de diya... ab jo promise kiya tha dusra wala set... uska kya hua?”
(Sir halka jhuka ke ammu ke shoulder pe cheek se lag jaata hai full drama mode)
Ammu (blushing annoyed):
“Tujhe set chahiye ya main?”
(Uska shoulder se halki si push maar ke peeche hoti hai)
Arjun (winking):
“Set ke saath tu mil jaaye toh bonus hai... waise bhi... Tere figure par wo ekdm fir hai
(Uska nazar thoda niche jata hai
Ammu ki waistline ki taraf)
Ammu:
“ARJUN!”
(Uske haath mein chappal nahi hoti warna maar deti… par aankhon se maar zaroor deti hai)
Thoda pause... dono aankhon mein aankhon daalte hain
Arjun (softly):
“Ammu… mazaak kar raha hoon, lekin sach yeh hai... main tujhe roz milne ke 100 reason bana sakta hoon... par asli wajah tu hi hoti hai.”
Ammu (chup si,smile dabaate hue):
“Kabhi kabhi mujhe lagta hai tu sirf
set lene aata hai.”
Arjun:
“Set hoon... par sirf tere saath.”
(Woh uska haath pakadta hai halki si grip, koi force nahi)
Masala Chowk – Part 2
"Haathon Mein Tera Haath, Shanu..."
Time: 1:15 PM
Location: Jaipur – Masala Chowk (Post-lunch calm, mellow sunlight, light breeze)
Slow motion mein dono nikalte hain ek golgappe wale ke pass se. Shanu abhi bhi chaat enjoy kar rahi hoti hai — uska dupatta shoulder se halka sa fisla hai aur baal thodi si messy bun mein, kuch karein uske chehre ko softly graze kar rahi hoti hain.
Zaheer usse dekhta hai, jaise usse baat karne ka mood ho hi nahi — bas dekhne ka mood ho.
Phir bina kuch kahe, Zaheer uska haath pakad leta hai.
Shanu rukti hai ek second, aankhen thodi narrow karti hai, cheek me halki si teasing wali muskan ke saath.
Toh permission lene ka irada kab tha?
Zaheer uski aankhon mein aankhen daal kar kehta hai... jab tu haath chhuda leti. Abhi toh lagta hai... tujhe bhi yeh touch pasand hai.
Shanu haath nahi chhudaati. Hassi dabaa ke ek sip chai leti hai kulhad se... aur dono ek narrow lane mein slow walk karne lagte hain.
Background mein ek stall se retro gaana bajta hai
Pehla nasha, pehla khumaar...
Dono ke kadam sync mein.
Zaheer ab Shanu ko poore lambe time se bas observe karta jaa raha hai.Uske jhumke dhoop mein hilte hain.Galle ka chhotasa heart-shaped locket halka sa chest ke paas pendulum ki tarah hil raha hai.
Baal khule hain thoda messy, thoda free.Eyes calm, cheek lightly pink, lips pe chai ki halki warmth.
Zaheer ke andar kuch soft melt karta hai.Dil mein uska ek voice-over chalne lagta hai
Yeh ladki... kabhi chaat jaisi spicy, kabhi kulfi jaisi calm. Lekin aaj... aaj toh lagta hai jaise saari duniya ko mute karke sirf isse feel karta jaaun.
Ek stall ke side mein ek bench milti hai.
Shanu baith jaati hai, uska haath ab bhi Zaheer ke haath mein hota hai.Main soch rahi thi tu busy hoga... tujhe time milega bhi ya nahi.
Zaheer uski aankhon mein directly dekhta hai
Main busy ho sakta hoon... lekin tu meri priority ban chuki hai.
Shanu thoda sharma ke neeche dekhti hai
Tu toh poetry bhi bolne laga... kya baat hai.
Zaheer thoda jhuk ke whisper karta hai
Jab muse Shanu ho... toh har line shayari ban jaati hai.
Woh dono baithe hain, haath mein haath, baatein halki, hawa halki...
Masala Chowk ke corner pe chaat ki thali khatam ho chuki haiLekin dil bhar chuka hai.Background mein ek bachcha chaat girakar ro raha hota hai…Shanu aur Zaheer dono usse dekhte hain aur haste hain.Shanu ke cheek pe dimple padta haiZaheer uske dimple ko 3-second tak gh Ghoorta rehta hai bina palke jhapkaye.Scene slowly zoom out karta hai camera unke haath ke close-up se start hota haiAur background mein gaana fade hota hai
Scene Title: "Waqt Nikla Ja Raha Hai..."
Location: Ammu ki chhat
Time: Sunday afternoon – 2:30 PM
Ammu chhat par halki dhoop mein jhaadu lagane ka natak kar rahi thi...
Arjun halki awaz mein aata hai uske bilkul peechhe
Tu toh waaqai perfect biwi material nikli… chhat bhi chamak rahi hai, aur tu bhi.
Ammu sideways dekhti hai, eyebrows raise karti hai
Tera timing toh match fix karne jaisa hota hai... sabzi pyaaz mein tadka daala nahi ki tu tapak gaya.
Arjun uski kamar se halki si hold leke cheek se cheek lagakar kehta hai
Waise tadke ki baat tune chhedi hai... toh main bhi wahi lene aaya hoon.
Ammu uska haath softly hata ke aage badhti hai
Aisa koi deal toh nahi hua tha ki main baar baar tujhe set doongi.
Arjun uske peechhe aata hai, uska dupatta pakadta hai aur huskily bolta hai
Waqt nikal raha hai Ammu… itna torture mat kar... ek aur set dede meri jaan, warna main chhat se nahi jaaunga aaj.
Ammu turn karke uske saamne khadi hoti hai, arms cross kar ke
Jab maanga tha tab acting ki thi, ab set ki need real hai?
Arjun uski aankhon mein directly dekhta hai
Us din toh sirf acting chal rahi thi, aaj toh jazbaat bhi involved hai… aur tumhari wo pink wali chhoti si cheez… bhool gaya tu, woh meri neend uda le gayi thi.
Ammu cheek blush se bhari hoti hai… uski aankhen chhupana chahti hai, lekin ek light smile control nahi hoti.
Arjun dheere se uska haath pakadta hai
Tera bas chale toh tu mujhe bina oxygen ke chhod de... par main toh zinda rehna chahta hoon… mere lungs ko chahiye woh pink set ki hawa.
Ammu hansi rok ke kehti hai
Tujhse bada nautanki maine nahi dekha… waise bhi, main koi weekly lingerie delivery service thodi hoon.
Arjun uska haath kheench kar usse thoda aur paas karta hai
Nahi… tu toh meri special edition exclusive model hai… limited stock, lifetime ke liye.
Ammu uski aankhon mein dekhti hai… phir uske chest par thodi si thap thap karti hai
Main dekh rahi hoon tu kahaan tak jaata hai. Par yeh sab romantic dialogues, yaad rakhna… bill ke saath interest lagega.
Arjun uski kamar ke dono taraf apne haath rakhta hai, halki si grip mein
Main ready hoon… interest samet, principal bhi deta hoon. Bas tu ek baar haan keh de.
Ammu ke lips thoda tremble karte hain… vo kuch bolti nahi… sirf aankhon se kehti hai — you’re too much.
Aur Arjun uski aankhon mein jhuk kar fasa hua whisper karta hai
Tere liye… always.
Camera slowly zoom out karta hai... Ammu ki chhat se upar ke aasman tak...
Beech mein sirf ek chhota sa moment... do log... ek chhupke chhupke chal rahi mohabbat.
[i]Yeh kaisa ehsaas hai... jo tujh mein base rahe...[/i]
Time: Sunday afternoon
Ammu chhat par halki dhoop mein jhaadu lagane ka natak kar rahi thi...
Arjun halki awaz mein aata hai uske bilkul peechhe
Tu toh waaqai perfect biwi material nikli… chhat bhi chamak rahi hai, aur tu bhi.
Ammu sideways dekhti hai, eyebrows raise karti hai
Tera timing toh match fix karne jaisa hota hai... sabzi pyaaz mein tadka daala nahi ki tu tapak gaya.
Arjun uski kamar se halki si hold leke cheek se cheek lagakar kehta hai
Waise tadke ki baat tune chhedi hai... toh main bhi wahi lene aaya hoon.
Ammu uska haath softly hata ke aage badhti hai
Aisa koi deal toh nahi hua tha ki main baar baar tujhe set doongi.
Arjun uske peechhe aata hai, uska dupatta pakadta hai aur huskily bolta hai
Waqt nikal raha hai Ammu… itna torture mat kar... ek aur set dede meri jaan, warna main chhat se nahi jaaunga aaj.
Ammu turn karke uske saamne khadi hoti hai, arms cross kar ke
Jab maanga tha tab acting ki thi, ab set ki need real hai?
Arjun uski aankhon mein directly dekhta hai
Us din toh sirf acting chal rahi thi, aaj toh jazbaat bhi involved hai… aur tumhari wo pink wali chhoti si cheez… bhool gaya tu, woh meri neend uda le gayi thi.
Ammu cheek blush se bhari hoti hai… uski aankhen chhupana chahti hai, lekin ek light smile control nahi hoti.
Arjun dheere se uska haath pakadta hai
Tera bas chale toh tu mujhe bina oxygen ke chhod de... par main toh zinda rehna chahta hoon… mere lungs ko chahiye woh pink set ki hawa.
Ammu hansi rok ke kehti hai
Tujhse bada nautanki maine nahi dekha… waise bhi, main koi weekly lingerie delivery service thodi hoon.
Arjun uska haath kheench kar usse thoda aur paas karta hai
Nahi… tu toh meri special edition exclusive model hai… limited stock, lifetime ke liye.
Ammu uski aankhon mein dekhti hai… phir uske chest par thodi si thap thap karti hai
Main dekh rahi hoon tu kahaan tak jaata hai. Par yeh sab romantic dialogues, yaad rakhna… bill ke saath interest lagega.
Arjun uski kamar ke dono taraf apne haath rakhta hai, halki si grip mein
Main ready hoon… interest samet, principal bhi deta hoon. Bas tu ek baar haan keh de.
Ammu ke lips thoda tremble karte hain… vo kuch bolti nahi… sirf aankhon se kehti hai — you’re too much.
Aur Arjun uski aankhon mein jhuk kar fasa hua whisper karta hai
Tere liye… always.
Camera slowly zoom out karta hai... Ammu ki chhat se upar ke aasman tak...
[i]Beech mein sirf ek chhota sa moment... do log... ek chhupke chhupke chal rahi mohabbat.[/i]
[i]Location: Jaipur outskirts highway, near Nahargarh foothills[/i]
Backdrop: Late-afternoon golden sunlight, open roads, cool breeze
Bike ke ignition ka halkasa mechanical vibration… Zaheer ne handle tight pakda hua hai, aur uski aankhen straight road pe focused hain.
Peechhe Shanu slowly aake baithi hai, pehle thoda gap chhod ke. Uske baal halki breeze mein udd rahe hain, dupatta loosely lapeta hua hai.
Zaheer ne rearview mirror se ek baar dekha, par kuch bola nahi.
Shanu ki aankhen helmet ke andar se bhi expressive thi – soft… slightly nervous… lekin intentionally unaware.
Bike start hoti hai… pehle gear… second gear… speed badhti hai.
Slow Motion Begins
Shanu ka body weight thoda se shift hota hai — aur achanak…
Uske dono haath aake softly Zaheer ki waist ko grip kar lete hain.
Zaheer ka dil ek second skip karta hai. Uska poora torso halkasa tight ho jata hai, jaise kisi ne ek hi pal mein uske andar hawa bhar di ho.
Uske andar ek internal monologue chalu hota hai:
Yeh toh maine socha nahi tha… shayad sirf ride samjha tha, par yeh… yeh toh kuch aur hai.
Shanu ka chin uski peeth ke just upar tikta hai, aur breeze mein uske perfume ki halka sa whiff Zaheer tak pahuchti hai… wohi pehla waala jasmine aur musk jaisa soft scent.
Zaheer slow kar deta hai bike… jaan bujh kar.
Ek side se dhoop uski aankhon mein lagti hai… lekin usse parwah nahi.
Uska dhyan sirf ek jagah hai — Shanu ke haathon ke pressure mein.
Shanu softly puchti hai
Ruk kyun gaya?
Zaheer bina peeche dekhe bolta hai
Lagta hai brakes bhi jealous ho gaye… tujhe feel karne se pehle ruka diya mujhe.
Shanu blush kar jaati hai… lekin apna grip aur tight karti hai.
Bike ek open road par badhti hai… camera upar se track karta hai —
Do bodies ek dusre se quietly fused, koi shabd nahi… koi zyada harkat nahi… sirf hawa, dhoop, aur ek chhupi si chemistry.
Zaheer’s POV (Internal Voice)
Tu kahin bhi chali ja Shanu… par ab jab tu itni paas hai, lagta hai tujhe chhod doon toh sab kuch chhoot jaayega.
Bike door jaa rahi hai... aur camera Shanu ke dupatte ko hawa mein udte hue track karta hai.
Uske jhumke thoda hilte hain… zaheer ke kaan tak jaake kabhi kabhi tik-tik karte hain…
Ek rhythm ban rahi hai – speed ki, emotion ki, chemistry ki.
[i]Scene fade hota hai.[/i]
[i]Location: Ammu ka ghar – chhat se uske kamre tak[/i]
Backdrop: Golden hour, chhat ki deewar pe dhoop ka halka sa naqsh, aur unke beech ka charged sa silence
Ammu deewar se tikke khadi thi… Arjun uske bilkul saamne, dono ke beech sirf ek step ka faasla.
Aankhon mein halka sa gussa… lekin zidd zyada thi.
Arjun ne halki si cheeky tone mein bola
Ab to hadd ho gayi Ammu… kab se tu sirf promise pe promise de rahi hai… main koi dummy boyfriend hoon kya?
Ammu uski taraf dekh ke smirk karti hai
Kya karein... tu bhi toh har baat par set maangta hai… kabhi kapde, kabhi pyar, kabhi vaada. Hisaab rakhna mushkil ho gaya hai.
Arjun thoda aage badh kar uski aankhon mein jhaankta hai
Is baar vaada nahi… reward chahiye. Live delivery.
Ammu aankhen half-close karke, slow tone mein kehti hai
Tujhe lagta hai main itni aasani se de dungi?
Arjun thoda sarcastic bolta hai
Acha… abhi tak toh lag raha tha ki tu bhi chah rahi hai… par bas tadpaane mein maza le rahi hai.
Ammu sharma ke aankhen neeche karti hai, lekin wo blush aur tease dono mix hota hai.
Arjun ka patience ab chhil chuka tha.
Suddenly… ek flow mein… bina zyada soch ke Arjun aage badhta hai, apne dono haathon se Ammu ki kamar ko pakadta hai… aur usse godh mein utha leta hai.
Ammu ek halki si chhoti cheekh nikalti hai
Arjun… pagal ho gaya hai kya?
Lekin uski aankhon mein dar nahi… sirf wo sparkle thi — wohi thrill wali.
Godh mein uthate waqt ek second ke liye dono ki aankhen perfectly sync ho jaati hai… ek dum still… ek dum intense…
Us pal mein cheekh, sharmaahat, gussa… sab dissolve ho jaata hai.
Aur phir…
Wahi ek romantic smile… dono ke lips pe ek saath — bina kisi shabd ke.
Arjun kehta hai
Bas… ab is baar chhupa ke nahi… uthake le jaa raha hoon… direct room tak.
Ammu kuch nahi kehti… bas uske neck pe apne haath rakh ke balance karti hai, lekin uski aankhen baar baar Arjun ke chehre ko dekhti hai jaise wo bhi is plan ka part ho chuki ho.
Arjun kadam kadam chalte hue uske room ki taraf badhta hai…
Neeche se Asma ki awaz aati hai
Ammu… sabzi mein namak dal diya?
Ammu Arjun ke kaan ke paas jaake whisper karti hai
Namak toh main tere zakhmon mein dalungi agar kisi ne dekh liya…
Arjun hasti aankhon se bolta hai
Phir toh chhupke le jaane ka hi maza hai baby…
Camera unke pichhe se track karta hai —
Ammu Arjun ki godh mein… uske dupatte ka ek kona hawa mein udd raha hai… aur uske cheek pe blush ki laali chamak rahi hai.
[i]Arjun quietly gate close karta hai… aur room ke darwaze tak pahuchta hai.[/i]
[i]Nahargarh Par Iqraar”[/i]
Location: Nahargarh Fort – Sunset Point
Time: Sunday – 6:45 PM
Backdrop: Suraj dhal raha hai, Jaipur ke skyline par orange aur pink rang bikhar rahe hain. Thandi hawa chal rahi hai, jisme Shanu ka dupatta udta jaa raha hai…
Dono hilltop ke edge par khade hain. Neeche pura Jaipur chamak raha hai – jaise sheher ne khud apne liye roshni pahen li ho.
Lekin dono bas chup chap lagta hai ki dono ki baatein pure din me khatm si ho gayi hai, idhar shanu kisi wait me ki yeh bol kyu nahi raha or idhar zaheer apni hi hesitation me lekin uske mann me bhi yeh iraada ki aaj ise yeh dikhana hai ki boring nahi roaring hu wo ek look shanu ko deta hai hai jaise ki use kuch idea mil gaya ho
Zaheer dono haath spread karke hawa mein cheekhta hai
immmmm maaddddd abouutttt youuuuuuu shannnnuuuuuuu, iiiii loveeeeeeeeeee youuuuuuuuu shannnnaaayaaaaaa sinnnghhhhhhhhh
Loud. Clear. Pure madness ke saath.
Shanu palat kar uska muh dekhti hai, aankhen wide open… lips pe disbelief wala smile. Jaise ki usne kabhi yeh expect Kiya hi na ho
Woh 2 steps peeche hoti hai, lekin dil se do kadam aage…
Uska gala bhar aata hai.
Phir wo bhi dono haath hawa mein utha kar cheekhti hai
Mainnnn bhhhhhi pyaaaaaar kaaaaaarti hoooooon tujjjjjjhse Zaheeeeeeeer qureshhhhhiiiiiii ! Samjha? Zaheer!!
Tears + smile + hawa = ek cinematic explosion
Dono ikdum se hanste lagte hain — shayad apni madness pe… ya is cheesy filmi moment pe… ya khud pe… ya us pyaar pe jo finally… bol diya gaya.
Zaheer slowly uske paas aata hai… Shanu uski taraf dekhti hai… aur iss baar, wo typical Shanu wali awkwardness nahi hoti —
Iss baar aankhon mein complete certainty hoti hai.
Zaheer ke lips slightly part hote hain kuch kehne ko…
Shanu ke lips thoda tremble karte hain…
But kuch kaha nahi jaata.
Dono ke beech ka faasla sirf kuch centimeters ka reh jaata hai…
Shanu ke baal halki breeze mein hilte hain, dupatta upar uddta hai jaise scene ki background dancer ban gaya ho.
Slow Motion
Unka eye contact toot'ta nahi.
Zaheer apna haath Shanu ke cheek tak le jaata hai…
Aur dheere se uske lips pe apne lips le aata hai.
Koi sudden jerk nahi… koi aggressive pull nahi…
Bas ek gentle, pehla pyaar wala kiss — full of warmth and quiet passion.
Wide Drone Shot:
Sunset backdrop.
Nahargarh Fort ka ancient pabangt.
Do silhouettes — ek kiss mein frozen.
Aur hawa mein udta hua ek red dupatta…
Or pichhe fireworks hota hua
Scene slowly fade out hota hai…
Aur ek soft background score bajta hai…
[i]Tu hi meri shab hai subah hai ka bgm[/i]
[i]Location: Ammu ka Room – Late Afternoon[/i]
Time: 4:30 PM
Backdrop: Hawa me naram dhoop ka chhata, khidkiyon se andar aa raha halka sa breeze. Room me ek sukoon bhari khamoshi, sirf fan ki halki ghoomti awaaz…
Ammu wardrobe ke saamne khadi thi.
Uska ek haath almari ke handle par… doosre se kapdo ke hangers ko ek ek karke aage kar rahi thi.
Badbadati ja rahi thi, zara annoyed tone me…
Pata nahi kya obsession hai iska…
Phir se wahi… wahi cheez…
Matlab koi aur gift maangta hai... yeh to direct kapdon ka demand list le aata hai.
Uske baal halki si ponytail me the, lekin kuch strands neck ke paas nikal aaye the.
Wardrobe se halki halki kapdo ki khusboo aa rahi thi.
Peeche se Arjun Sirf apni aankhon se use absorb karta hai…
Uski aankhen Ammu ki neck pe tik jaati hain…
Woh jhumka jo thoda hil raha hai fan ki hawa se…
Woh halka sa back ka curve…
Woh expression jo thoda annoyed tha, lekin cheek pe ek blush chhupa hua tha.
Arjun dheere se aage badhta hai. Koi noise nahi karta.
Uska haath pehle Ammu ke kandhe tak jaata hai… phir pyaar se uski kamar ko piche se pakadta hai.
Ammu ek second ke liye hilti hai…
Phir uski saari badbad band ho jaati hai.
Woh bas saans andar kheenchti hai.
Arjun ka cheek uske neck ke paas aata hai. Awaaz naram, almost whisper jaisa…
Itna toh tu ziddi hai… par dekh… de rahi hai.
Ammu halki si smile karti hai…
Uska haath still wardrobe ke andar hota hai, lekin ab kapde dhundhne ka act slow ho chuka hai.
Arjun uske thode aur kareeb aata hai…
Uske dono haath ab Ammu ki kamar ke dono sides pe gently lock ho jaate hain.
Ammu, jo usually kuch na kuch bolti rehti thi, iss baar bas aankhen bandh kar leti hai.
Uska cheekh nahi, uska gussa nahi… bas ek silence.
Jo keh raha tha ki usse bhi yeh moment chahiye tha… shayad pehle se bhi zyada.
Arjun ke lips uske hairline ke paas aate hain…
Uska cheek bas lightly brush hota hai Ammu ke cheek se…
Koi kiss nahi… koi loud action nahi…
Sirf woh sannaata jisme sirf ehsaas ki awaaz hoti hai.
Ammu ke lips pe ek soft si muskaan phir se aati hai.
Arjun uske kaan ke piche ek chota sa kiss karta hai or ammu ek sigh leti hai arjun ke hath uski body se fisalte huye uski thighs tak aate hai or fir ek hath se arjun usko palat deta hai kamar pakad kar
Ammu sidha arjun ke gale lag jati hai or uska face arjun ke sine me hota hai or arjun uske neck ke paas kiss karna start karta hai
Ammu ki sigh badhti jati hai or arjun uski chin utha kar uska face upar karta hai or fir ek kiss
Dono ke lips aapas mein chipak jate hai dono ek dusre ko jese khane lagte hai ammu or arjun ki dono ki aankhein ab band hoti hai or arjun ka hath ammu ki thighs se upar hota hua uski kamar tak aata hai ammu or arjun dono ke lips slow me jaise sync ho rahe ho or dono ek dusre ko jaise aaj bakhshne ke mood me na ho lekin is intimacy me bhi unka kiss soft or feeling wala tha pyaar wali feeling na ki koi hawas jo dono mita rahe ho
Arjun apna uski kamar se thoda move karke uske pait tak lata hai ammu ko bhi uska touch ab comfort de raha tha or dono ke honth ek dusre ke hontho ko puri tarah gila kar chuke they
Arjun ka hath uske pait se thoda upar ki taraf upar niche hote huye left boobs se bas ek inch ki doori par tha or arjun uska down bra design feel kar chuka tha ki niche se asma ki tez aawaz aati hai
Asma
Ammu, niche aa rahi hai ya main ab upar aau, aadhe ghante se bula rahi hu
Ammu ek second ke liye apni aankhein arjun se milati hai kiss karte huye or fir ek deep kiss or ek cut arjun ke lips par arjun jhalla kar usse apne lips alag karta hai or ammu uski taraf dekh kar ek naughty smile karti hai arjun bhi usse nazreinn milata hai or uske chehre par bhi ek smile aa jati hai sukoon wali smile
Ammu ki nazrein nichi hoti hai to Arjun uski nazro ka picha karta hai or camera niche hota hai to Arjun dekhta hai ammu ke hath me uske wo pink bra panty jo thode purane se ho gaye the arjun jaldi se unhe jhapatta hai or ammu ki nazar arjun par jati hai or arjun unhe leke bhag jata hai chhat ke rastey se
[i]Ammu ke chehre par ek smile aati hai or uski saansein abhi bhi upar niche ho rahi thi[/i]
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