13-07-2025, 09:45 PM
Update 44
Typing... Typing... Pyaar ho raha hai"
Time: 6:30 PM
Location:
Zaheer: Terrace par chai ke saath, sky dekhte hue
Shanu: Apne kamre mein, window ke paas baithi, phone haath mein
[Whatsapp Chat Starts – Green & White bubbles]
Zaheer:
Aj kal tu kam dikh rahi hai… mujhe hi dekhna pad raha hai zyada.
? 6:31 PM
Shanu:
Acha? Mujhe laga tu mujhse bhaag raha hai thoda.
?
? 6:32 PM
Zaheer:
Mujhe laga tu mujhe bhaagne de rahi hai... ?
? 6:32 PM
Shanu:
Drama mat kar ?
Mujhe sab samajh aaya tha canteen mein.
? 6:33 PM
Zaheer:
Haan woh smile mein sab keh diya tune.
Tu has rahi thi... aur main samajh gaya.
? 6:34 PM
Shanu:
Tu waise kitna overconfident hai na ?
Lekin… is baar sahi tha.
? 6:35 PM
(Zaheer typing... typing... ruk jaata hai. Fir wapas type karta hai.)
Zaheer:
Tere ek note ne mujhe bata diya... tu duniya ke noise mein sabse loud lagti hai.
Even jab tu kuch nahi bolti.
? 6:36 PM
Shanu:
Zaheer… tu sach bol raha hai ya poetry mode mein hai?
? 6:36 PM
Zaheer:
Sach poetry jaisa lagta hai, jab tu samne ho.
? 6:37 PM
Shanu:
Stop. ?
Chai peeti hoon main, tu toh mujhe pighla dega.
? 6:38 PM
Zaheer:
Toh pighal jaa. Maine cup sambhal liya hai.
☕
? 6:38 PM
(Shanu ke screen par "❤️ Reacted to your message")
Shanu:
Waise tu itna smooth kab se ho gaya?
? 6:39 PM
Zaheer:
Jab se tu mil gayi.
? 6:39 PM
(Shanu ka screen blink karta hai: "Typing..." Fir ruk jaata hai. Typing again.)
Shanu:
Next time mujhe bhoolna mat.
Main awkward ho sakti hoon, lekin bewakoof nahi.
? 6:41 PM
Zaheer:
Tu meri awkward wali perfect ho.
? 6:42 PM
(Donon side pe soft smiles. Shanu apne window ke baar dekh rahi hoti hai, Zaheer terrace se sky dekh raha hota hai. Aur phone screen par aakhri message blink karta hai:)
Zaheer:
Bas, yeh waala version of us mujhe bohot pasand aa raha hai.
Location: College Campus – Morning Break (10:45 AM)
Setting: Garden ke paas ek bench, sab log idhar-udhar break pe, thoda hustle-bustle
(Shanu aaj thodi fresh lag rahi hai, simple white kurti, open hair, ek file haath mein. Wo akele bench pe baithi hoti hai, sunlight uske baalon se khel rahi hoti hai.
Uska chehra relaxed hai lekin aankhon mein kal raat ki whatsapp chat ki baatein ghuma rahi hoti hain.)
(Door se Zaheer enter karta hai — dusre ladkon ke saath thoda chill karte hue. Lekin jaise hi Shanu ko baitha dekhta hai, uski speed thodi dheemi ho jaati hai.
Wo sab ko “main abhi aaya” kehke side se us bench ke paas aata hai.)
Zaheer (halka smile deta hai)
"Kitne marks mile kal ki smile pe?"
(Shanu uski taraf dekhti hai. No smile, no sarcasm — bas ek steady gaze.)
Shanu:
"Smile mein toh full. Par question paper ka answer abhi bhi pending hai."
(Zaheer thoda surprise hota hai. Then smirks.)
Zaheer:
“Toh answer bhi wahi dega jisse paper diya tha.”
(pause)
“Oral exam kab lena hai?”
Shanu (shoulder shrug)
“Tumhara confidence dangerous hota ja raha hai.”
(Phir file band karti hai)
“Lekin mujhe suits karta hai.”
(Zaheer ab full grin mein hota hai.)
(Tabhi ek group pass karta hai, jisme se ek ladka chillate hue kehta hai:)
Group Guy:
"Yaar, tum dono ki body language se toh pura college doubt kar raha hai!"
(Shanu thoda awkward si smile kar leti hai, lekin aankhon se Zaheer ko dekhti hai.
Zaheer uski taraf lean hota hai — halka, friendly — aur soft tone mein kehta hai:)
Zaheer (softly)
"Tu abhi bhi mere taraf thoda zyada lean karti hai."
(pause)
“Aur mujhe aadat ho rahi hai.”
Shanu (grinning)
"Toh ab habit break kar doon?"
Zaheer:
"Break karne ki wajah dhoondh raha tha… nahi mili."
(Thoda rukta hai)
“Tu reh jaa. Aadat ban jaa.”
(Background mein bell bajti hai. Students classroom ki taraf badhne lagte hain.
Zaheer Shanu ka file uske haath se le leta hai —)
Zaheer:
"Chal, attendance ke liye nahi... tere saath walk ke liye ready hoon."
Shanu:
"Tu har line itni... likhi-likhai kyun bolta hai?"
Zaheer (naughty smile)
"Jab samne wali ladki itni filmy ho toh dialogue real ho jaate hain."
(Dono side by side chalne lagte hain. Door jaate hue camera unki backs ko follow karta hai. Shanu thoda blush karti hai, Zaheer halki se victory smile deta hai.)
Typing... Typing... Pyaar ho raha hai"
Time: 6:30 PM
Location:
Zaheer: Terrace par chai ke saath, sky dekhte hue
Shanu: Apne kamre mein, window ke paas baithi, phone haath mein
[Whatsapp Chat Starts – Green & White bubbles]
Zaheer:
Aj kal tu kam dikh rahi hai… mujhe hi dekhna pad raha hai zyada.
? 6:31 PM
Shanu:
Acha? Mujhe laga tu mujhse bhaag raha hai thoda.
?
? 6:32 PM
Zaheer:
Mujhe laga tu mujhe bhaagne de rahi hai... ?
? 6:32 PM
Shanu:
Drama mat kar ?
Mujhe sab samajh aaya tha canteen mein.
? 6:33 PM
Zaheer:
Haan woh smile mein sab keh diya tune.
Tu has rahi thi... aur main samajh gaya.
? 6:34 PM
Shanu:
Tu waise kitna overconfident hai na ?
Lekin… is baar sahi tha.
? 6:35 PM
(Zaheer typing... typing... ruk jaata hai. Fir wapas type karta hai.)
Zaheer:
Tere ek note ne mujhe bata diya... tu duniya ke noise mein sabse loud lagti hai.
Even jab tu kuch nahi bolti.
? 6:36 PM
Shanu:
Zaheer… tu sach bol raha hai ya poetry mode mein hai?
? 6:36 PM
Zaheer:
Sach poetry jaisa lagta hai, jab tu samne ho.
? 6:37 PM
Shanu:
Stop. ?
Chai peeti hoon main, tu toh mujhe pighla dega.
? 6:38 PM
Zaheer:
Toh pighal jaa. Maine cup sambhal liya hai.
☕
? 6:38 PM
(Shanu ke screen par "❤️ Reacted to your message")
Shanu:
Waise tu itna smooth kab se ho gaya?
? 6:39 PM
Zaheer:
Jab se tu mil gayi.
? 6:39 PM
(Shanu ka screen blink karta hai: "Typing..." Fir ruk jaata hai. Typing again.)
Shanu:
Next time mujhe bhoolna mat.
Main awkward ho sakti hoon, lekin bewakoof nahi.
? 6:41 PM
Zaheer:
Tu meri awkward wali perfect ho.
? 6:42 PM
(Donon side pe soft smiles. Shanu apne window ke baar dekh rahi hoti hai, Zaheer terrace se sky dekh raha hota hai. Aur phone screen par aakhri message blink karta hai:)
Zaheer:
Bas, yeh waala version of us mujhe bohot pasand aa raha hai.
Location: College Campus – Morning Break (10:45 AM)
Setting: Garden ke paas ek bench, sab log idhar-udhar break pe, thoda hustle-bustle
(Shanu aaj thodi fresh lag rahi hai, simple white kurti, open hair, ek file haath mein. Wo akele bench pe baithi hoti hai, sunlight uske baalon se khel rahi hoti hai.
Uska chehra relaxed hai lekin aankhon mein kal raat ki whatsapp chat ki baatein ghuma rahi hoti hain.)
(Door se Zaheer enter karta hai — dusre ladkon ke saath thoda chill karte hue. Lekin jaise hi Shanu ko baitha dekhta hai, uski speed thodi dheemi ho jaati hai.
Wo sab ko “main abhi aaya” kehke side se us bench ke paas aata hai.)
Zaheer (halka smile deta hai)
"Kitne marks mile kal ki smile pe?"
(Shanu uski taraf dekhti hai. No smile, no sarcasm — bas ek steady gaze.)
Shanu:
"Smile mein toh full. Par question paper ka answer abhi bhi pending hai."
(Zaheer thoda surprise hota hai. Then smirks.)
Zaheer:
“Toh answer bhi wahi dega jisse paper diya tha.”
(pause)
“Oral exam kab lena hai?”
Shanu (shoulder shrug)
“Tumhara confidence dangerous hota ja raha hai.”
(Phir file band karti hai)
“Lekin mujhe suits karta hai.”
(Zaheer ab full grin mein hota hai.)
(Tabhi ek group pass karta hai, jisme se ek ladka chillate hue kehta hai:)
Group Guy:
"Yaar, tum dono ki body language se toh pura college doubt kar raha hai!"
(Shanu thoda awkward si smile kar leti hai, lekin aankhon se Zaheer ko dekhti hai.
Zaheer uski taraf lean hota hai — halka, friendly — aur soft tone mein kehta hai:)
Zaheer (softly)
"Tu abhi bhi mere taraf thoda zyada lean karti hai."
(pause)
“Aur mujhe aadat ho rahi hai.”
Shanu (grinning)
"Toh ab habit break kar doon?"
Zaheer:
"Break karne ki wajah dhoondh raha tha… nahi mili."
(Thoda rukta hai)
“Tu reh jaa. Aadat ban jaa.”
(Background mein bell bajti hai. Students classroom ki taraf badhne lagte hain.
Zaheer Shanu ka file uske haath se le leta hai —)
Zaheer:
"Chal, attendance ke liye nahi... tere saath walk ke liye ready hoon."
Shanu:
"Tu har line itni... likhi-likhai kyun bolta hai?"
Zaheer (naughty smile)
"Jab samne wali ladki itni filmy ho toh dialogue real ho jaate hain."
(Dono side by side chalne lagte hain. Door jaate hue camera unki backs ko follow karta hai. Shanu thoda blush karti hai, Zaheer halki se victory smile deta hai.)
Time: 1:15 PM – Lunch break
Location: College Canteen – Corner wali table, jahan Arjun aksar baithta hai
(Canteen mein normal rush hai. Tables full hai, lekin ek corner table pe Arjun akele baitha hai white shirt ke sleeves rolled, ek hand mein chai ka cup aur doosre haath mein spoon se usse hilata jaa raha hai.
Uski aankhen door entrance pe lagi hain — jaise kisi ka intezaar ho.)
(Tabhi entrance pe Ammu dikh jaati hai — light blue kurti, dupatta loosely shoulder pe. Uske haath mein ek file aur juice ka tetra pack. Arjun ki aankhon mein ek chamak aati hai.
Ammu uski taraf dekhti hai, pehle to ignore karne ka act karti hai… lekin phir seedha usi table ki taraf badhti hai.)
Ammu (casually)
“Yeh seat khaali hai ya mood bhi?”
(Arjun bina jawab diye uske liye chair kheenchta hai)
Arjun:
"Seat bhi khaali thi... aur mood bhi. Ab dono bhar gaye."
(Thoda dramatic tone mein)
"Tumhare aane se."
(Ammu baithti hai, juice ka pack table pe rakhti hai. Arjun spoon se chai ghumata jaa raha hai.)
Ammu (eyebrow raise)
"Tum spoon ghumaa rahe ho ya plan?"
Arjun (muskurate hue)
"Plan toh tum ghooma gayi ho... tab se mind stir ho raha hai."
(Dono ke beech momentarily silence hota hai. Ammu juice pe focus karne ka act karti hai, lekin aankhon ke kone se Arjun ko dekhti hai.)
Ammu(flaunting her dupatta)
Dekh blue bola tha, blue pehen ke aayi hu fir bhi no compliment no comment... Aisa mehboob kisi ko na mile
Arjun(staring softly her suit and teasing)
Hot lag rahi hai... Mehboob... Kitna acha word hai na... Mehboob me se main to main ho gaya,baki ki baate bane to kuch Dil ko tasalli aaye ....
Ammu (blushes, thoda stern)
"Arjun!"
Arjun (fake innocent face)
"Kya? Main toh bas main discuss kar raha tha. Intentions pure hain."
Ammu (juice ka straw ghumate hue)
“Bas… ab naye comment mat dena.”
Arjun (flirty smirk)
“Naya nahi dunga... par agar ek new set dikhe, toh tareef karna toh farz hai mera.”
(Ammu ki aankhen khul jaati hain wo usse thoda ghoorti hai, fir blush karte hue juice ka sip leti hai clearly trying to hide her smile.)
Ammu quickly uthti hai.)
Ammu (jaldi se)
“Mujhe class ke liye jaana hai. Tum yahi chai aur comment dono peetey rehna.”
(phir thoda rukti hai)
“…Aur haan. Kabhi kabhi stupid hona bhi achha lagta hai.”
(Wo chalti hai. Arjun peeche se bas dekhta hai, cup uthata hai, sip karta hai.)
Arjun (self talk mein)
“Stupid... par sirf tumhare liye.”
Arjun akela table pe chai leke baitha hai, par face pe ek jeet wali smile
Location: College Canteen – Corner wali table, jahan Arjun aksar baithta hai
(Canteen mein normal rush hai. Tables full hai, lekin ek corner table pe Arjun akele baitha hai white shirt ke sleeves rolled, ek hand mein chai ka cup aur doosre haath mein spoon se usse hilata jaa raha hai.
Uski aankhen door entrance pe lagi hain — jaise kisi ka intezaar ho.)
(Tabhi entrance pe Ammu dikh jaati hai — light blue kurti, dupatta loosely shoulder pe. Uske haath mein ek file aur juice ka tetra pack. Arjun ki aankhon mein ek chamak aati hai.
Ammu uski taraf dekhti hai, pehle to ignore karne ka act karti hai… lekin phir seedha usi table ki taraf badhti hai.)
Ammu (casually)
“Yeh seat khaali hai ya mood bhi?”
(Arjun bina jawab diye uske liye chair kheenchta hai)
Arjun:
"Seat bhi khaali thi... aur mood bhi. Ab dono bhar gaye."
(Thoda dramatic tone mein)
"Tumhare aane se."
(Ammu baithti hai, juice ka pack table pe rakhti hai. Arjun spoon se chai ghumata jaa raha hai.)
Ammu (eyebrow raise)
"Tum spoon ghumaa rahe ho ya plan?"
Arjun (muskurate hue)
"Plan toh tum ghooma gayi ho... tab se mind stir ho raha hai."
(Dono ke beech momentarily silence hota hai. Ammu juice pe focus karne ka act karti hai, lekin aankhon ke kone se Arjun ko dekhti hai.)
Ammu(flaunting her dupatta)
Dekh blue bola tha, blue pehen ke aayi hu fir bhi no compliment no comment... Aisa mehboob kisi ko na mile
Arjun(staring softly her suit and teasing)
Hot lag rahi hai... Mehboob... Kitna acha word hai na... Mehboob me se main to main ho gaya,baki ki baate bane to kuch Dil ko tasalli aaye ....
Ammu (blushes, thoda stern)
"Arjun!"
Arjun (fake innocent face)
"Kya? Main toh bas main discuss kar raha tha. Intentions pure hain."
Ammu (juice ka straw ghumate hue)
“Bas… ab naye comment mat dena.”
Arjun (flirty smirk)
“Naya nahi dunga... par agar ek new set dikhe, toh tareef karna toh farz hai mera.”
(Ammu ki aankhen khul jaati hain wo usse thoda ghoorti hai, fir blush karte hue juice ka sip leti hai clearly trying to hide her smile.)
Ammu quickly uthti hai.)
Ammu (jaldi se)
“Mujhe class ke liye jaana hai. Tum yahi chai aur comment dono peetey rehna.”
(phir thoda rukti hai)
“…Aur haan. Kabhi kabhi stupid hona bhi achha lagta hai.”
(Wo chalti hai. Arjun peeche se bas dekhta hai, cup uthata hai, sip karta hai.)
Arjun (self talk mein)
“Stupid... par sirf tumhare liye.”
Arjun akela table pe chai leke baitha hai, par face pe ek jeet wali smile
[i](Canteen ke bahar Arjun wall ke sahare khada hota hai, chai ka cup ab bhi haath mein, aankhen door jaate hue Ammu pe tikki hoti hain. Uski aankhon mein wo classic Arjun-wali “thoda toh jeet gaya main” wali smile hoti hai.)
[/i]
(Tabhi peeche se ek dramatic voice aata hai —)
Taz (Sunil Grover mode mein)
"Arreeee reeeeee... Bhai sahab!
Chai garam hai ya chemistry?"
(Arjun hamesha ki tarah chill rehta hai, bina dekhe sip leta hai.)
Arjun:
"Tu kabhi time pe kyun nahi aata? Ya kam se kam time pe chhup kyun nahi jaata?"
Taz (aake uske bagal mein baith jaata hai bench pe)
"Main tere andar ke feelings ka voice over hoon bhai... Mujhe ignore karna matlab apne jazbaat ka murder."
Arjun (muskurake)
"Bhai, tere jazbaat mujhe FRIENDS ka Joey bana ke chodenge... confused aur bhooka."
Taz (seriously)
"Tu waise bhi bhooka hi lag raha hai...Lekin emotional bhookh bhi toh hai. Ammu ke chehre se blush ka meter dekh raha tha main—Red Zone mein thi boss!"
Arjun:
“Main usse bas yaad dila raha tha ki main bhoolta nahi hoon…
(smirks)
Taz (thoda dramatising voice mein)
"Waise yeh sab romance wamaans chal raha hai...Lekin football team selection ka kya?Wo coach hai bhai — woh toh tumhare shorts pe nahi, shots pe number dega!"
Arjun (suddenly straightens)
"Abe haan! Woh form bhi bharna hai...Main toh pura Ammu ke dupatte mein ulajh gaya tha."
Taz:
"Bas ek baat aur...
Is baar team selection ke baad tu captain ban gaya na..."
(pause)
"...toh us Ammu ke liye trophy bhi le aayega jo terrace pe sirf smile deti hai."
Arjun (smiling)
"Trophy bhi, dupatta bhi, aur dil bhi — teenon le aayenge bhai."
[i](Dono laugh karte hain. Arjun last sip leta hai chai ki, aur dono chal padte hain corridor ke end ki taraf — training ground ki direction mein.)[/i]
[/i]
(Tabhi peeche se ek dramatic voice aata hai —)
Taz (Sunil Grover mode mein)
"Arreeee reeeeee... Bhai sahab!
Chai garam hai ya chemistry?"
(Arjun hamesha ki tarah chill rehta hai, bina dekhe sip leta hai.)
Arjun:
"Tu kabhi time pe kyun nahi aata? Ya kam se kam time pe chhup kyun nahi jaata?"
Taz (aake uske bagal mein baith jaata hai bench pe)
"Main tere andar ke feelings ka voice over hoon bhai... Mujhe ignore karna matlab apne jazbaat ka murder."
Arjun (muskurake)
"Bhai, tere jazbaat mujhe FRIENDS ka Joey bana ke chodenge... confused aur bhooka."
Taz (seriously)
"Tu waise bhi bhooka hi lag raha hai...Lekin emotional bhookh bhi toh hai. Ammu ke chehre se blush ka meter dekh raha tha main—Red Zone mein thi boss!"
Arjun:
“Main usse bas yaad dila raha tha ki main bhoolta nahi hoon…
(smirks)
Taz (thoda dramatising voice mein)
"Waise yeh sab romance wamaans chal raha hai...Lekin football team selection ka kya?Wo coach hai bhai — woh toh tumhare shorts pe nahi, shots pe number dega!"
Arjun (suddenly straightens)
"Abe haan! Woh form bhi bharna hai...Main toh pura Ammu ke dupatte mein ulajh gaya tha."
Taz:
"Bas ek baat aur...
Is baar team selection ke baad tu captain ban gaya na..."
(pause)
"...toh us Ammu ke liye trophy bhi le aayega jo terrace pe sirf smile deti hai."
Arjun (smiling)
"Trophy bhi, dupatta bhi, aur dil bhi — teenon le aayenge bhai."
[i](Dono laugh karte hain. Arjun last sip leta hai chai ki, aur dono chal padte hain corridor ke end ki taraf — training ground ki direction mein.)[/i]
[i]Location: Football ground – 4:00 PM
[/i]
Background: College sports department ne team list lagayi hai whiteboard pe, aur sab players crowd bana ke list dekh rahe hain.
(Zoom-in: Arjun aur Taz crowd ke beech se apni jagah banate hain.)
Taz (excited)
"Bhai! Bhai! Tera naam top pe hai!"
(Arjun list dekh kar slowly muskurata hai — 'CAPTAIN: ARJUN SINGH likha hota hai. Wo ek deep breath leta hai. Sab log taaliyan bajate hain. Coach unke paas aata hai.)
Coach:
"You better lead like a captain, Arjun. No show-off, only game."
Arjun (firmly):
"You’ll get both, sir. Show aur score."
(Crowd mein thoda cheer hota hai. Sab players haath milate hain Arjun se lekin ek kona mein Zaheer khada hota hai, expression blank.)
? Scene 2: “Ammu’s Candid Confession”
Location: Girls' garden bench – 4:15 PM
Characters: Ammu & her friend Reecha
(Ammu usi dupatta mein baithi hoti hai, juice sip karte hue. Uske face pe ek soft glow hota hai.)
Reecha (teasing tone):
"Tu us Arjun ke saath canteen mein kya blush kar rahi thi madam? Whole college saw the vibes!"
Ammu (trying to act normal):
"Kuch nahi... bas baatein ho rahi thi."
Reecha:
"Baatein ya flirting?"
Ammu (pause, then softly):
"Pata nahi…
Jab uske saath hoti hoon na, sab normal lagta hai.
Jaise har stupid line bhi special ho jaati hai."
(Reecha surprise mein uski taraf dekhti hai)
Ammu (blinking away her own smile):
"Main usse maaf kar chuki hoon… par ab main khud ko samajhne ki koshish kar rahi hoon.
Wo Arjun… wo kabhi simple nahi hota."
Reecha (teasing)
"Hmm… toh Mr. Complicated ko tu dil de baithi hai?"
Ammu (smiling shyly, slowly)
Shayd… ya phir already de chuki hoon, ab bas realize ho raha hai."
(Ammu phir se sky ki taraf dekhti hai — aur scene cut hota hai.)
? Scene 3: “Zaheer – Fire Beneath the Calm”
Location: Locker Room – 4:30 PM
(Zaheer akela hota hai, sab log ground mein nikal gaye hote hain. Wo slowly apna bag uthata hai, aur Arjun ka naam board pe dekhte hue ruk jaata hai.)
(Uske mind mein echo hota hai coach ka: “Captain: Arjun Singh”)
Zaheer (self-talk):
"Is baar bhi wahi… sab uske hi naam.
Sab uski hi timing."
(Wo bench pe baith jaata hai, football ko neeche ghoorta hai.)
Zaheer (softly, almost sarcastically):
"Captain ban gaya... Sala coach hu andha lund hai, lekin wo dogla Bhand team ka kachra karega
(Uske expression mein mild jealousy nahi, balki ek competitive fuel dikhai deta hai.
Wo ball uthata hai, aur full power kick karta hai locker ke side wall pe — ball takraake wapas girta hai.)
Zaheer (gritting teeth):
"Game on, Arjun."
Arjun field pe ball practice kar raha hai
Ammu apne phone mein Arjun ki chat reread karti hai
[i]Zaheer silently training karta hai — punching bag pe ya solo drills[/i]
[/i]
Background: College sports department ne team list lagayi hai whiteboard pe, aur sab players crowd bana ke list dekh rahe hain.
(Zoom-in: Arjun aur Taz crowd ke beech se apni jagah banate hain.)
Taz (excited)
"Bhai! Bhai! Tera naam top pe hai!"
(Arjun list dekh kar slowly muskurata hai — 'CAPTAIN: ARJUN SINGH likha hota hai. Wo ek deep breath leta hai. Sab log taaliyan bajate hain. Coach unke paas aata hai.)
Coach:
"You better lead like a captain, Arjun. No show-off, only game."
Arjun (firmly):
"You’ll get both, sir. Show aur score."
(Crowd mein thoda cheer hota hai. Sab players haath milate hain Arjun se lekin ek kona mein Zaheer khada hota hai, expression blank.)
? Scene 2: “Ammu’s Candid Confession”
Location: Girls' garden bench – 4:15 PM
Characters: Ammu & her friend Reecha
(Ammu usi dupatta mein baithi hoti hai, juice sip karte hue. Uske face pe ek soft glow hota hai.)
Reecha (teasing tone):
"Tu us Arjun ke saath canteen mein kya blush kar rahi thi madam? Whole college saw the vibes!"
Ammu (trying to act normal):
"Kuch nahi... bas baatein ho rahi thi."
Reecha:
"Baatein ya flirting?"
Ammu (pause, then softly):
"Pata nahi…
Jab uske saath hoti hoon na, sab normal lagta hai.
Jaise har stupid line bhi special ho jaati hai."
(Reecha surprise mein uski taraf dekhti hai)
Ammu (blinking away her own smile):
"Main usse maaf kar chuki hoon… par ab main khud ko samajhne ki koshish kar rahi hoon.
Wo Arjun… wo kabhi simple nahi hota."
Reecha (teasing)
"Hmm… toh Mr. Complicated ko tu dil de baithi hai?"
Ammu (smiling shyly, slowly)
Shayd… ya phir already de chuki hoon, ab bas realize ho raha hai."
(Ammu phir se sky ki taraf dekhti hai — aur scene cut hota hai.)
? Scene 3: “Zaheer – Fire Beneath the Calm”
Location: Locker Room – 4:30 PM
(Zaheer akela hota hai, sab log ground mein nikal gaye hote hain. Wo slowly apna bag uthata hai, aur Arjun ka naam board pe dekhte hue ruk jaata hai.)
(Uske mind mein echo hota hai coach ka: “Captain: Arjun Singh”)
Zaheer (self-talk):
"Is baar bhi wahi… sab uske hi naam.
Sab uski hi timing."
(Wo bench pe baith jaata hai, football ko neeche ghoorta hai.)
Zaheer (softly, almost sarcastically):
"Captain ban gaya... Sala coach hu andha lund hai, lekin wo dogla Bhand team ka kachra karega
(Uske expression mein mild jealousy nahi, balki ek competitive fuel dikhai deta hai.
Wo ball uthata hai, aur full power kick karta hai locker ke side wall pe — ball takraake wapas girta hai.)
Zaheer (gritting teeth):
"Game on, Arjun."
Arjun field pe ball practice kar raha hai
Ammu apne phone mein Arjun ki chat reread karti hai
[i]Zaheer silently training karta hai — punching bag pe ya solo drills[/i]
[i]Scene Title: “Secret Sips, Stolen Smiles”
[/i]
Time: 5:30 PM – College chhuttī ke turant baad
Location: Ek small cozy coffee corner – college se thoda door, jahaan students zyada nahi jaate
(Scene start hoti hai college gate ke bahar se. Crowd slowly nikal raha hota hai. Arjun ek black hoodie mein, apne phone pe casually scroll karta hua side mein khada hai. Door se Ammu dikhai deti hai – white kurti, light denim jeans, dupatta loosely tied, haath mein uski diary aur phone.)
(Ammu uski taraf dekh ke ek slight nod deti hai. Arjun halka sa smile deta hai. Dono seedha college gate ke corner se quietly ek narrow gali mein chalte hain — bina kisi friend ko bataye.)
☕ Location Shift: Coffee Corner
(Ek chhoti si jagah, orange lights, old radio playing soft retro songs. Dono ek kone wali table pe baith jaate hain — thoda side hoke, jahan se kisi ko spot karna mushkil ho.)
Ammu (coffee stir karte hue, softly)
“Toh… Captain singh. Kaisa lag raha hai?”
Arjun (half-smile ke saath)
“Waise toh lag raha hai ki main World Cup le aaya hoon…
lekin sach mein… sirf ek bande ka smile dekhna tha — woh ho gaya.”
(Ammu coffee sip karti hai, aankhon se usse briefly dekhti hai aur phir nazar hata leti hai.)
Ammu:
“Taz ne bataya
Arjun:
“Taz toh coffee shop pe bhi mujhe pyaar mein consult karta hai.
Lekin… tu bata. Aaj blush karna ka plan tha ya wahi pink dupatta wala magic tha?”
Ammu (laughs softly, phir straight ho jaati hai)
“Tum na… har normal cheez ko flirt bana dete ho.”
Arjun (leans forward slightly, flirty tone)
“Tumhare aas-paas sab cheezein automatic charming ho jaati hain… main kya karoon?”
(Thoda pause hota hai — dono coffee pe focus karte hain. Background mein soft jazz instrumental baj raha hota hai.)
Ammu (soft tone mein)
“Mujhe laga tha… main tumse itni jaldi khul nahi paungi…”
Arjun:
“Toh ab khuli ho ya abhi bhi zip locked?”
Ammu (side smile ke saath)
“Thoda khuli hoon… lekin abhi bhi lock ka combo code confuse kar rahi hoon.”
Arjun:
“Perfect. Mujhe puzzles pasand hain. Bas waqt de, main solve kar lunga…”
(Tabhi waiter do coffee mugs aur ek brownie plate table pe rakhta hai. Arjun brownie ko Ammu ki taraf slide karta hai.)
Arjun:
“Team select ho gayi, captain ban gaya, aur us brownie wali tu saamne baithi hai — iss se zyada life sorted nahi ho sakti.”
Ammu:
“Confidence ya cheesiness?”
Arjun:
“Dono. Captain hu ab main — pass bhi main hi dunga, goal bhi main hi maarunga.”
(Ammu aankhen chhoti karke dekhti hai usse. Arjun brownie ka small piece fork se uthata hai aur uski taraf forward karta hai. Ammu hesitate karti hai, phir finally piece le leti hai.)
Ammu (mumbling)
"Yeh captaincy thoda zyada effect daal rahi hai tumpe."
Arjun:
"Sirf ek pe daalni thi… aur woh kaamyaab ho gaya."
[i]Dono coffee cups ke peechhe baith ke quietly sip kar rahe hain. Window ke bahar college ka board dikh raha hai, lekin yahaan sirf dono ke muskurane ki aawaz hai.[/i]
[/i]
Time: 5:30 PM – College chhuttī ke turant baad
Location: Ek small cozy coffee corner – college se thoda door, jahaan students zyada nahi jaate
(Scene start hoti hai college gate ke bahar se. Crowd slowly nikal raha hota hai. Arjun ek black hoodie mein, apne phone pe casually scroll karta hua side mein khada hai. Door se Ammu dikhai deti hai – white kurti, light denim jeans, dupatta loosely tied, haath mein uski diary aur phone.)
(Ammu uski taraf dekh ke ek slight nod deti hai. Arjun halka sa smile deta hai. Dono seedha college gate ke corner se quietly ek narrow gali mein chalte hain — bina kisi friend ko bataye.)
☕ Location Shift: Coffee Corner
(Ek chhoti si jagah, orange lights, old radio playing soft retro songs. Dono ek kone wali table pe baith jaate hain — thoda side hoke, jahan se kisi ko spot karna mushkil ho.)
Ammu (coffee stir karte hue, softly)
“Toh… Captain singh. Kaisa lag raha hai?”
Arjun (half-smile ke saath)
“Waise toh lag raha hai ki main World Cup le aaya hoon…
lekin sach mein… sirf ek bande ka smile dekhna tha — woh ho gaya.”
(Ammu coffee sip karti hai, aankhon se usse briefly dekhti hai aur phir nazar hata leti hai.)
Ammu:
“Taz ne bataya
Arjun:
“Taz toh coffee shop pe bhi mujhe pyaar mein consult karta hai.
Lekin… tu bata. Aaj blush karna ka plan tha ya wahi pink dupatta wala magic tha?”
Ammu (laughs softly, phir straight ho jaati hai)
“Tum na… har normal cheez ko flirt bana dete ho.”
Arjun (leans forward slightly, flirty tone)
“Tumhare aas-paas sab cheezein automatic charming ho jaati hain… main kya karoon?”
(Thoda pause hota hai — dono coffee pe focus karte hain. Background mein soft jazz instrumental baj raha hota hai.)
Ammu (soft tone mein)
“Mujhe laga tha… main tumse itni jaldi khul nahi paungi…”
Arjun:
“Toh ab khuli ho ya abhi bhi zip locked?”
Ammu (side smile ke saath)
“Thoda khuli hoon… lekin abhi bhi lock ka combo code confuse kar rahi hoon.”
Arjun:
“Perfect. Mujhe puzzles pasand hain. Bas waqt de, main solve kar lunga…”
(Tabhi waiter do coffee mugs aur ek brownie plate table pe rakhta hai. Arjun brownie ko Ammu ki taraf slide karta hai.)
Arjun:
“Team select ho gayi, captain ban gaya, aur us brownie wali tu saamne baithi hai — iss se zyada life sorted nahi ho sakti.”
Ammu:
“Confidence ya cheesiness?”
Arjun:
“Dono. Captain hu ab main — pass bhi main hi dunga, goal bhi main hi maarunga.”
(Ammu aankhen chhoti karke dekhti hai usse. Arjun brownie ka small piece fork se uthata hai aur uski taraf forward karta hai. Ammu hesitate karti hai, phir finally piece le leti hai.)
Ammu (mumbling)
"Yeh captaincy thoda zyada effect daal rahi hai tumpe."
Arjun:
"Sirf ek pe daalni thi… aur woh kaamyaab ho gaya."
[i]Dono coffee cups ke peechhe baith ke quietly sip kar rahe hain. Window ke bahar college ka board dikh raha hai, lekin yahaan sirf dono ke muskurane ki aawaz hai.[/i]
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