Adultery Love Sex And War Part 1 : Age Of Darkness

[RCF]

My criticism comes from the fact that I like the story, I never comment on a story and review it if I do not like it. I like the screen play very much, its the dialogues some times are really filmy lol

I understand the filmy angle and the action sequences, they seem natural than the whole Hemant persona..I like him until he worked hard to turn himself into his former self, after that I felt the swooning of the ladies around him went over board as if they did not see a chiseled man in their life...Half of them were body shaming him before he changed his physique which again showed the true nature of the women. Now every one's arc is some what merging to a focal point of hyping up of Hemant, which is getting monotonous.
Add to the fact that the story begins and continues with an assumption that only a fit man can satisfy his wife which is not true, Even a pot belly one can fuck for more than hour, it depends on how skillfully he is using his tool but I get it.

Also there are some too many convenient forced scenarios which were carefully woven to make the story length drag for ever. Ex: I would have expected Dheeraj to be there on his anniversary party, and the whole episode of Sonarika would have been exposed but it was postponed.

Anyways your story telling is still spectacular and entertaining. Please give regular updates...delay at this point will slow the pace.

~RCF