09-07-2025, 10:09 PM
(09-07-2025, 12:22 AM)sexypreeti Wrote: Please proof read before publishing...
Rajesh Sir ordered with a cruel gleam. "Ab apne pair choos," he commanded. She could feel the roughness of his skin, the dirt and grime of the day. She began to lick, her tongue tracing the contours of his feet
I am dead sure he meant to say "abh mere pair choos"....
My apologies, I fully understand how a small mistake can spoil the mood. I will endeavour to prevent such errors from happening again. I hope you enjoyed the flow of the story apart from that.