09-07-2025, 05:26 PM
(09-07-2025, 04:39 PM)readersp Wrote: The tension is becoming too much..I guess that is how it is going to go!!! Can you be a little more graphic in describing Priya..adds more to the plot.. only a request.. you are the creator!!! go ahead
Hi readersp
I really appreciate you following the story and getting into the tension. means a lot. ?
And thank you for the feedback about Priya!
You're absolutely right, fleshing her out more could really deepen the plot. I’ll definitely add more descriptive detail about her character in the upcoming parts.
Love having you along for the journey! ?
Thanks a lot
-- Shailu