Adultery Priya Didi

[shailu4ever]

Its a wonderful writeup. I would suggest you to add some more spice in it. If Ravi could see her navel and belly button. That would be add something more to your description. I know you had thought about the plot in your way but i think with your level of description and art of writing you can explain such scenes like a sculptor building a beautiful statue. Just a small suggestion. You are fantastic as a writer.

Hi Raj087

Thank you so much for your kind words and for taking the time to share your thoughts 

I really appreciate both the encouragement and the suggestion.

The idea of describing things like a sculptor carving a statue? That’s such a vivid compliment

I am honored.  I will try my best, but not sure how much I can stand up to that compliment.

The suggestions you have given are very helpful, and I’ll absolutely keep it in mind as the story unfolds.

I look forward for your feedback on my future updates.

Warm regards

-- Shailu