08-07-2025, 08:38 PM
Its a wonderful writeup. I would suggest you to add some more spice in it. If Ravi could see her navel and belly button. That would be add something more to your description. I know you had thought about the plot in your way but i think with your level of description and art of writing you can explain such scenes like a sculptor building a beautiful statue. Just a small suggestion. You are fantastic as a writer.