Adultery Love Sex And War Part 1 : Age Of Darkness

[Harry Jordan]

Well Harry I read your part 2 of Chapter 15.
~RCF

Thank you for your opinion and your take. 

To some extent I agree , yes , without a shadow of a doubt Sonarika is definitely in the wrong. I don't intend to show her as some perfect angel in any instance. She did make reckless decisions in her life , and now she has gone into the pit to the point there is no guarantee she can save her own family. Add that to her own childhood friend conspiring to make this relation happen for an old revenge clearly shows she also has an enemy she has no idea about. This is her struggle , her conflict to protect her family , not knowing that she is fighting to salvage what she can.

As for her not visiting Hemant's place , that is obviously the point of the story rather than the narrated convenience in that regard. Sonarika has only seen two phases of Hemant , she met and fell in love with him in his darkest times when his sufferings began , that is why Hemant keeps her in high regard because when he lost all hope ,she came in his life and he lived and found love again. So all her life , Sonarika has only known a Hemant who sucked in fashion sense and eventually became and fat and slow regular guy. She could never comprehend her husband evolving into something better because she never saw that side of him. In her mind , she has picturised a Hemant who is calm and kind , always cheerful , and the only past she is being aware of is that Hemant was once in the army and he left because he watched his friend die which is his trauma and PTSD.

That is the point of her story , she saw Hemant as her choice but found her desire in Vikram. But little did she knew that her choice too had that desire which she never knew about. Which is why she is falling for him , Sonarika right now is doing exactly that , falling in love with Hemant all over again because she is starting to see her desire in him but it might just be too late for now.

As for Hemant forgiving her? Do you really think Hemant is that type of a character. I didn't write him to become a victim in the story , like you've saw in the previous chapter ending , the darker side of him is awakening out. And soon his past and present will merge forming a new side of Hemant. 

Like I said , there will be consequences , this whole story is a story of consequences , Sonarika has consequences and even Hemant has some.

So yes , Sonarika will face her consequences , and it will be the consequences that will hurt her physically and mentally.