05-07-2025, 07:51 PM
(05-07-2025, 06:40 PM)Kuchnahi24 Wrote: Too detailed lag raha h ye kahi ho raha h aur hum use dekh kar khud mahsoos kar rhe h kya baat h writer sahab… bahut khoob
Kahani apni si lagi jaani pahchani si is update ke saath parai si lagi likhne ka kamaal h aapka…
Arjun nikhat ka involve hona jaldi laga ya betuka laga filhaal.. bs ammu arjun aur arjun ammu ka hota…to kya hi hota ❤️
First mai feeling the pyar badhea phir kuch twist turn aayenge.. par rachna aapki h to rachnakar ko salaam…
Par jaisa ab tak padha h ammu ghar h arjun ka shayad ghum phir kar lautega..
( kuch chut raha h wali feeling padhne ke baad) ( till now story is Hero)
lets see
Kahani ki audience hi uski jaan hoti,
Jab tak audience hai tab tak kahani chalti rehti hai isliye bahut bahut shukriya is kahani ka hissa banne ke liye
Apka suggestion besh kimti hai is writer ke liye
Ummeed rakhta hu ki aap pura faith rakhenge is kahani me or
Yakeen dilata hu ki kahani apko disappoint nahi karegi last mein


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