Misc. Erotica Journey of a Dutiful Son towards Cuckson

[veenaimo]

Hi Mortalbeast,

Thanks for the update and for considering the feedback! I wanted to clarify that my earlier suggestions weren’t meant to push for toning down the extreme elements—quite the opposite! In erotic storytelling, extreme elements are a rare and exciting find these days, and I’m a big fan of writers like Nebic and Indian sub-male narratives who excel in this space.

To explain what I mean by "extreme," it’s about the gap between a mother’s normal behavior and how much she deviates when with the bull. Normal might be a caring, traditional mom—then the deviation comes when she crosses socially acceptable norms with Venkat, making it illicit. When that gap stretches beyond moral, social, and even legal boundaries, bringing humiliation to her family, husband, and son, it becomes truly compelling.

You’ve already done an amazing job showing this shift in her character, and that’s a strength to build on.I’d love to see how extreme she and Venkat can get—pushing past all norms to heighten the drama. For me, it’s not just about sex scenes or intensity; it’s the narrative depth—whether it’s exploring what happened in the US or what’s brewing in the house.

Feel free to decide the direction, but I’d encourage you to deviate as far as possible from the "normal mom" archetype. Can’t wait to see the next update tomorrow!