Misc. Erotica Maheen ........ Mohy Rang Dy Piya (Completed)

[yenjvoy]

I have a feeling that pink bhai lost either interest or will to really write the story he originally started. There was the whole 'Ganesh -Pooja- thali' track that was sooooo promising but was just dropped abruptly. Though handled beautifully and really extremely erotic, in the unique and beloved style of pinkbaby, maheen's transformation seemed kind of too fast. I liked how pink bhai explored breaking '. women's taboos one by one - laveil, idol worship, lying to husband, western clothes, adultery, drinking alcohol, and pork. But author could have explored another facet which was initially there but later discarded - maheen's naturally submissive nature, her desire to be dominated by masculine hairy muscular men with big dicks. I was looking forward to her secret post-marital affair with her handsome boss, where she offers him her tight ass, and foursome with Nick pleasing all 3 girls. Story has so much more potential. Bhai lost interest maybe.