Misc. Erotica Journey of a Dutiful Son towards Cuckson
(30-06-2025, 08:38 AM)veenaimo Wrote:
  • Exactly, the act of humiliation and detailed dialogues between the bull and cuck.. or even mom and cuck makes the play more and more interesting.. the author seems to be master in writing, however, its just few suggestions. The below are few suggestions 

  1. Neglect and Indifference: Portray the mother consistently ignoring her son’s needs, making him wait excessively for basic attention or necessities, emphasizing her disregard for his well-being.
  2. Mistreatment in Favor of the Bull: Depict the mother treating her son poorly or dismissively to prioritize her boyfriend (the bull), showcasing her preference through actions or words that belittle the son.
  3. Harsh Verbal Abuse: Incorporate scenes where the mother uses extreme, degrading language to berate her son, amplifying the humiliation to heighten the emotional stakes.
  4. Overt Preference for the Bull: Highlight the mother openly favoring the bull over her family, through actions like lavish attention or public displays of affection that marginalize her son and other relatives.
  5. Detailed Thali Discussions: Include in-depth, provocative conversations about the thali (a symbolic element) between the bull and the son, as well as the mother and son, to explore power dynamics, cultural significance, and emotional conflict.
  6. Bold Actions in the Son’s Presence: Showcase the mother engaging in bold, provocative behavior with the bull in front of her son, reinforcing her dominance and disregard for his feelings.

Regarding Geetha’s Sister and the Affair in the US Context:
Instead of a brief flashback, expand the narrative around whether Geetha’s sister was aware of her son’s affair with Geetha. Develop this through detailed discussions or confrontations between key characters (e.g., Geetha, the son or husband). Explore the emotional and relational fallout, motivations, and consequences in a nuanced, dialogue-driven manner, rather than a rushed or summarized account.

wow u gave fodder material for author to continue for atleast another year ?
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RE: Journey of a son to cuckson - by garamrohan - 14-03-2025, 11:24 AM
RE: Journey of a son to cuckson - by Mortalbeast - 15-03-2025, 11:16 AM
RE: Journey of a son to cuckson - by krantikumar - 14-03-2025, 11:36 AM
RE: Journey of a son to cuckson - by Projectmp - 14-03-2025, 04:43 PM
RE: Journey of a son to cuckson - by Paty@123 - 15-03-2025, 11:02 AM
RE: Journey of a Dutiful Son towards Cuckson - by vramskool - 01-07-2025, 08:12 PM



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