Adultery Sneha's plight in Azamgarh

[Raj087]

Thanks a lot ::)
Kissing between mom and son will be too much 
Is it not ??

Hey chill ..it's still a good potential idea that you gave me.. thanks for that 

I am never saying you trying to destroy my story .. please relax my friend..
You may articulate more your ideas ..that might help .. though I am already done with the next episode which I will publish tonight ..

Still would love to see your version of narrative

Sure my friend. I actually find your way of narration quite brilliant and mature. See my intention is to Just give you a idea of Dhruv s emotional support to sneha. As in your 4th update where Moin and Ruksana comes for Dinner and Moin observes Sneha s navel Dhruv says i will protect you from him. So if there is a strong Bond Between Sneha and Dhruv in a parallel plot it would look more realistic. Wherein Dhruv's insecurity is depicted. And also his infatuation towards her Beauty which you have already established. There will be a continuity from that angle as well. In a modern backdrop of today's metro city mom son hugging is very common and considering Sneha's outlook towards life it perfectly goes with the plot. Sure wating for the next update tonite ?