Adultery Antarvasana: The Forbidden Fire – *** Varnika's First Surrender ***

[shailu4ever]

Hey everyone!

Okay… deep breath.

This is my very first time writing an intimate romance scene.  (Please be gentle with me!)

I might’ve fumbled a bit, maybe a clumsy hand here, a rushed heartbeat there, but that’s where you come in.

Spot any awkward moments, weird phrasing, or places that need a little extra heat (or sweetness)?

Let me know

I’m all ears and open to all kinds of feedback.

After all, Abhi’s romantic journey is just heating up… and trust me, he’s not done yet.

Abhi has plenty more romantic adventures coming his way.

So don’t be shy.

Please drop those likes, leave your thoughts, and tell me what worked (or didn’t).

I’m dying to know what you think!


-- Shailu