27-06-2025, 12:51 PM
Hey Sweetrati! Just wanted to say I’m really enjoying your story
One small thing though—I noticed that sometimes the updates don’t link smoothly.
Like one part ends on something interesting, but the next starts somewhere else and feels a bit disconnected.
Just thought I’d mention it in case it helps.
Still super excited for the next chapter!
One small thing though—I noticed that sometimes the updates don’t link smoothly.
Like one part ends on something interesting, but the next starts somewhere else and feels a bit disconnected.
Just thought I’d mention it in case it helps.
Still super excited for the next chapter!