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25-06-2025, 02:28 AM

It is going good. Well, the paragraphing is there in the content; however, all the dialogues are all tucked together. It would be more presentable and easy to go through if a new line starts after every dialogue ends. Keep going.

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NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 11-06-2025, 10:41 AM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 12-06-2025, 10:55 AM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 12-06-2025, 11:01 AM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 12-06-2025, 11:17 AM

RE: NEMESIS - by ray.rowdy - 12-06-2025, 09:32 PM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 14-06-2025, 11:24 AM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 14-06-2025, 11:00 AM

RE: NEMESIS - by ray.rowdy - 16-06-2025, 03:08 AM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 17-06-2025, 11:00 AM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 17-06-2025, 11:03 AM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 19-06-2025, 11:00 AM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 21-06-2025, 11:01 AM

RE: NEMESIS - by tweeny_fory - 11-10-2025, 01:23 PM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 11-10-2025, 06:40 PM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 24-06-2025, 10:59 AM

RE: NEMESIS - by ray.rowdy - 25-06-2025, 02:28 AM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 26-06-2025, 10:55 AM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 26-06-2025, 11:00 AM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 28-06-2025, 11:39 AM

RE: NEMESIS - by jamanuram - 30-06-2025, 11:27 PM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 01-07-2025, 10:58 AM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 01-07-2025, 11:00 AM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 03-07-2025, 11:00 AM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 05-07-2025, 11:00 AM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 08-07-2025, 11:19 AM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 08-07-2025, 11:34 AM

RE: NEMESIS - by rombyzomby - 08-07-2025, 03:13 PM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 10-07-2025, 12:45 PM

RE: NEMESIS - by jamanuram - 09-07-2025, 01:04 PM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 10-07-2025, 12:46 PM

RE: NEMESIS - by ray.rowdy - 09-07-2025, 07:34 PM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 10-07-2025, 12:47 PM

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RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 12-07-2025, 11:00 AM

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RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 15-07-2025, 11:00 AM

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RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 17-07-2025, 11:06 AM

RE: NEMESIS - by jamanuram - 17-07-2025, 11:31 AM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 19-07-2025, 10:52 AM

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RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 22-07-2025, 11:04 AM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 22-07-2025, 11:01 AM

RE: NEMESIS - by jamanuram - 22-07-2025, 11:16 AM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 24-07-2025, 10:52 AM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 24-07-2025, 11:00 AM

RE: NEMESIS - by jamanuram - 25-07-2025, 11:55 PM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 26-07-2025, 11:17 AM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 26-07-2025, 11:11 AM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 26-07-2025, 11:24 AM

RE: NEMESIS - by rombyzomby - 28-07-2025, 11:16 AM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 28-07-2025, 01:28 PM

RE: NEMESIS - by rombyzomby - 29-07-2025, 01:40 PM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 30-07-2025, 07:31 PM

RE: NEMESIS - by jamanuram - 28-07-2025, 10:58 PM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 29-07-2025, 10:45 AM

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RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 30-07-2025, 07:29 PM

RE: NEMESIS - by jamanuram - 29-07-2025, 02:25 PM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 30-07-2025, 07:32 PM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 30-07-2025, 07:34 PM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 31-07-2025, 11:01 AM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 02-08-2025, 11:03 AM

RE: NEMESIS - by rombyzomby - 02-08-2025, 11:10 AM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 05-08-2025, 11:05 AM

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RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 07-08-2025, 11:27 AM

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RE: NEMESIS - by jamanuram - 10-08-2025, 01:51 AM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 12-08-2025, 10:38 AM

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RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 19-08-2025, 11:05 AM

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RE: NEMESIS - by tomdickharry2024 - 24-08-2025, 03:43 PM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 26-08-2025, 11:03 AM

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RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 26-08-2025, 11:02 AM

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RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 28-08-2025, 11:00 AM

RE: NEMESIS - by tomdickharry2024 - 29-08-2025, 08:59 AM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 30-08-2025, 10:52 AM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 30-08-2025, 11:00 AM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 02-09-2025, 11:00 AM

RE: NEMESIS - by tomdickharry2024 - 03-09-2025, 09:12 AM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 04-09-2025, 10:43 AM

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RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 04-09-2025, 11:03 AM

RE: NEMESIS - by Pundit77 - 07-09-2025, 10:21 AM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 08-09-2025, 12:35 PM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 09-09-2025, 11:00 AM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 11-09-2025, 11:00 AM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 13-09-2025, 11:00 AM

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RE: NEMESIS - by tomdickharry2024 - 19-09-2025, 08:25 AM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 20-09-2025, 10:36 AM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 20-09-2025, 11:00 AM

RE: NEMESIS - by tomdickharry2024 - 21-09-2025, 03:59 PM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 21-09-2025, 08:47 PM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 23-09-2025, 11:00 AM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 25-09-2025, 11:00 AM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 25-09-2025, 11:09 AM

RE: NEMESIS - by tomdickharry2024 - 26-09-2025, 09:40 AM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 27-09-2025, 10:51 AM

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RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 29-09-2025, 12:20 PM

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RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 30-09-2025, 10:59 PM

RE: NEMESIS - by tomdickharry2024 - 01-10-2025, 06:57 AM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 02-10-2025, 12:31 PM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 06-10-2025, 05:35 PM

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RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 07-10-2025, 10:52 AM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 07-10-2025, 11:00 AM

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RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 09-10-2025, 11:05 AM

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RE: NEMESIS - by tomdickharry2024 - 13-10-2025, 07:21 AM

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RE: NEMESIS - by Pundit77 - 12-10-2025, 11:33 PM

RE: NEMESIS - by Neelkantha - 13-10-2025, 01:12 PM

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