24-06-2025, 02:05 PM
Hi Prady,
It's good to see that you have finally found your story for Devika...... This story looks amazing like the previous ones...... I like all the male characters, specially Devika's interactions with Ramlal and her new angle with Seenu ...... I like Vishnu and Pathan's character but it looks like you have given them unnecessary powers like they are blackmailing anyone whenever they want.....
I am more interested in seeing how Devika's story moves ahead from here with Ramlal and Seenu..... Looking forward to the conversation between Devika and Ramlal, when they both discuss about the night Ramlal saw Devika watching porn and fingering and the aftermath of that conversation.....
It's good to see that you have finally found your story for Devika...... This story looks amazing like the previous ones...... I like all the male characters, specially Devika's interactions with Ramlal and her new angle with Seenu ...... I like Vishnu and Pathan's character but it looks like you have given them unnecessary powers like they are blackmailing anyone whenever they want.....
I am more interested in seeing how Devika's story moves ahead from here with Ramlal and Seenu..... Looking forward to the conversation between Devika and Ramlal, when they both discuss about the night Ramlal saw Devika watching porn and fingering and the aftermath of that conversation.....