24-06-2025, 12:39 PM
(24-06-2025, 08:15 AM)sexypreeti Wrote: You could have expanded the sex between Mahima and the old man when he fucked her the first time. She couldn't have simply taken his supposedly big cock despite using oil just like that...There is a lot more that you could have built upon there...
Just my thoughts...
point taken... idea is to keep the past chapters short... otherwise main plot will be weakened.. anyway there will be one more old chapter at appropriate time and this Mahima episode is not over yet