Adultery Antarvasana: The Forbidden Fire – *** Varnika's First Surrender ***

[shailu4ever]

This is lovely writing, especially the key dialogues. The line, "You are breathing faster," when Abhi and Meghana's backs are touching, is particularly effective. Abhi's response, "Maybe the room is warmer," subtly hints that both of them are getting warmer, not just in temperature, but emotionally and physically too.
The playfulness amidst the building tension is great, creating an exotic and intriguing dynamic between them. It's the kind of subtle interaction that speaks volumes about the unspoken desires and growing connection between the characters.

Hi tweeny_fory

Thanks so much for this. It really means a lot! 

I’m glad that moment between Abhi and Meghana stood out to you. I was hoping the tension and connection would come through in a subtle way, so it’s great to hear that it worked. I really appreciate you picking up on those little details. It’s always encouraging to know when something lands the way it was intended. 

Your feedback is genuinely inspiring. It’s helping me stay motivated and excited to keep writing more. 

I really appreciate you taking the time to share your thoughts!

-- Shailu