21-06-2025, 01:28 PM
Upadte 3
Canteen packed hai ,kuch log maggi khate hue, kuch tables pe cards chal rahe hain.
Arjun aur Zaheer ek kone ki table pe baithe hain cold coffee aur samosa leke.
Tabhi ek nervous ladka,1st year wala Rishi aata hai thoda hichkichate hue.
RISHI (low voice): Arjun bhai... Zaheer bhai… thoda help chahiy
ARJUN (half-smile): Bol Rishi... kis teacher ka scooter chori karna hai?
RISHI:Wo nahi bhai… meri girlfriend hostel mein hai. Aaj uska birthday hai.
Main bas 5 minute ke liye usse wish karna chahta hoon... properly.
But hostel ka guard… matlab bhai, impossible hai.
Canteen packed hai — kuch log maggi khate hue, kuch tables pe cards chal rahe hain.
Arjun aur Zaheer ek kone ki table pe baithe hain — cold coffee aur samosa leke.
Tabhi ek nervous ladka, 2nd year wala "Rishi", aata hai — thoda hichkichate hue.
RISHI (low voice):
“Arjun bhai... Zaheer bhai… thoda help chahiye…”
ARJUN (half-smile):
“Bol Rishi... kis teacher ka scooter chori karna hai?”
RISHI:
“Wo nahi bhai… meri girlfriend hostel mein hai. Aaj uska birthday hai.
Main bas 5 minute ke liye usse wish karna chahta hoon... properly.
ZAHEER: Toh chori nahi, toh chori jaisa kaam toh hai.
(Rishi nod karta hai — hopeful)
Arjun aur Zaheer ek dusre ki taraf dekhte hain kuch nahi bolte.
Bas witty smile exchange karte hain jaise plan already ready ho.
OUTSIDE GIRLS’ HOSTEL WALL
College ka side compound hostel ka ek concrete wall.
Arjun aur Zaheer low-voice mein baat kar rahe hain, Rishi unke saath chhupa hua hai.
ZAHEER :Left wala light bandh hai... matlab warden ka room dark hai. Guard 15-minute ke chakkar mein gate se round leta hai.”
ARJUN:Rishi, tu ready hai? Ek baar chance mila toh sirf 3-minute hai.
RISHI (nervously):Haan bhai… par andar kaise?
ARJUN:Idhar se wall chhoti hai. Tu neeche se gift aur letter mujhe de,
main ladder pakda raha hoon. Baaki sab Zaheer manage karega.
Canteen packed hai ,kuch log maggi khate hue, kuch tables pe cards chal rahe hain.
Arjun aur Zaheer ek kone ki table pe baithe hain cold coffee aur samosa leke.
Tabhi ek nervous ladka,1st year wala Rishi aata hai thoda hichkichate hue.
RISHI (low voice): Arjun bhai... Zaheer bhai… thoda help chahiy
ARJUN (half-smile): Bol Rishi... kis teacher ka scooter chori karna hai?
RISHI:Wo nahi bhai… meri girlfriend hostel mein hai. Aaj uska birthday hai.
Main bas 5 minute ke liye usse wish karna chahta hoon... properly.
But hostel ka guard… matlab bhai, impossible hai.
Canteen packed hai — kuch log maggi khate hue, kuch tables pe cards chal rahe hain.
Arjun aur Zaheer ek kone ki table pe baithe hain — cold coffee aur samosa leke.
Tabhi ek nervous ladka, 2nd year wala "Rishi", aata hai — thoda hichkichate hue.
RISHI (low voice):
“Arjun bhai... Zaheer bhai… thoda help chahiye…”
ARJUN (half-smile):
“Bol Rishi... kis teacher ka scooter chori karna hai?”
RISHI:
“Wo nahi bhai… meri girlfriend hostel mein hai. Aaj uska birthday hai.
Main bas 5 minute ke liye usse wish karna chahta hoon... properly.
ZAHEER: Toh chori nahi, toh chori jaisa kaam toh hai.
(Rishi nod karta hai — hopeful)
Arjun aur Zaheer ek dusre ki taraf dekhte hain kuch nahi bolte.
Bas witty smile exchange karte hain jaise plan already ready ho.
OUTSIDE GIRLS’ HOSTEL WALL
College ka side compound hostel ka ek concrete wall.
Arjun aur Zaheer low-voice mein baat kar rahe hain, Rishi unke saath chhupa hua hai.
ZAHEER :Left wala light bandh hai... matlab warden ka room dark hai. Guard 15-minute ke chakkar mein gate se round leta hai.”
ARJUN:Rishi, tu ready hai? Ek baar chance mila toh sirf 3-minute hai.
RISHI (nervously):Haan bhai… par andar kaise?
ARJUN:Idhar se wall chhoti hai. Tu neeche se gift aur letter mujhe de,
main ladder pakda raha hoon. Baaki sab Zaheer manage karega.
Zaheer guard ke track pe aake casual chalne lagta hai phone pe loud voice mein:
ZAHEER (fake anger dikhate huye): Arey bhai Maine kaha na battery dead ho gaya toh light nahi jal raha...
Kya tu samajhta nahi kya? Tere CCTV ke wires loose hain
Guard (irritated):
Abe kaun hai tu? CCTV? Light? Kya bol raha hai?
Zaheer: Hostel ka contractor hoon, main,Tu call de admin ko, abhi!
(Guard totally confused — Zaheer usse gate ke left side le jaata hai)
Arjun peeche ke low wall pe Rishi ki madad se chhota ladder lagata hai.
Inside the hostel fence,ek ground floor window se ek ladki slowly curtain side karta hai Rishi ki girlfriend.
ARJUN (whispers):Abey chup, tujhe dikh raha hai na? Ja, wish bol, aur chilla mat.
RISHI (excited, emotional):
Happy birthday, Ria…
(Ladki silent smile karti hai — andar se ek small paper heart hold karti hai)
Arjun quietly unka gift window se pass karta hai.
Zaheer, guard se full technical nonsense bolke usko confuse karta hai:Kal light meter reading mein spike aaya tha, aapka fan overload ho raha hai…
Guard finally kehta hai, Theek hai bhai, tu ja... lekin ye sab mat bol!
Zaheer:Bas duty samajh ke bol raha hoon. Respect hai aapke night shift ko.
Arjun, Zaheer aur Rishi back walk kar rahe hote hain.
RISHI (super grateful):
Bhai, aap dono jaise log… asli college legend ho!
ARJUN:
Bas yeh yaad rakh agle saal same date pe, tujhe guard ke liye pastry bhi leke aani hai.
ZAHEER:Wo nahi khayega... lekin respect milega.
(Dono ek dusre ko look dete hai, mission accomplished.)
ZAHEER (fake anger dikhate huye): Arey bhai Maine kaha na battery dead ho gaya toh light nahi jal raha...
Kya tu samajhta nahi kya? Tere CCTV ke wires loose hain
Guard (irritated):
Abe kaun hai tu? CCTV? Light? Kya bol raha hai?
Zaheer: Hostel ka contractor hoon, main,Tu call de admin ko, abhi!
(Guard totally confused — Zaheer usse gate ke left side le jaata hai)
Arjun peeche ke low wall pe Rishi ki madad se chhota ladder lagata hai.
Inside the hostel fence,ek ground floor window se ek ladki slowly curtain side karta hai Rishi ki girlfriend.
ARJUN (whispers):Abey chup, tujhe dikh raha hai na? Ja, wish bol, aur chilla mat.
RISHI (excited, emotional):
Happy birthday, Ria…
(Ladki silent smile karti hai — andar se ek small paper heart hold karti hai)
Arjun quietly unka gift window se pass karta hai.
Zaheer, guard se full technical nonsense bolke usko confuse karta hai:Kal light meter reading mein spike aaya tha, aapka fan overload ho raha hai…
Guard finally kehta hai, Theek hai bhai, tu ja... lekin ye sab mat bol!
Zaheer:Bas duty samajh ke bol raha hoon. Respect hai aapke night shift ko.
Arjun, Zaheer aur Rishi back walk kar rahe hote hain.
RISHI (super grateful):
Bhai, aap dono jaise log… asli college legend ho!
ARJUN:
Bas yeh yaad rakh agle saal same date pe, tujhe guard ke liye pastry bhi leke aani hai.
ZAHEER:Wo nahi khayega... lekin respect milega.
(Dono ek dusre ko look dete hai, mission accomplished.)
Living room shaant hai. Ek kone ka lamp on hai soft yellow glow.
TV off. Kitchen ka shelf half open.
Ammu sofa pe baithi hai, ek side ka earphone laga hai, dusre se textbook dheere-dheere close kar rahi hai.
Main door quietly khulta hai Zaheer shoes haath mein leke andar aata hai.Uska shirt messed up tha lekin wo khud relax lag raha tha.
AMMU (without looking at him):Late night secret missions chal rahe hain kya aajkal
ZAHEER (lightly):Bas thoda social service... dosti ke naam pe.
AMMU:Dosti ya daredevil delivery
Zaheer paani ki bottle leke ek sip leta hai. Ammu ab uski taraf dekh ke book band kar leti hai.
ZAHEER (sitting on sofa ):Ek banda apni girlfriend ko girls hostel ke window tak birthday wish karna chahta tha.
Arjun aur main bas... assistant directors ban gaye.
AMMU (grinning):
Toh tum dono ne hostel wall ko public park samajh ke operation chalu kiya
ZAHEER:Ek dum calculated risk.
Guard ko ghuma diya, window locate ki, gift handover,. Clean exit.
AMMU:Banda apni girlfriend ke liye hostel ke peechhe ghus gaya.
Tum log uske liye time table bana ke aaye
ZAHEER:Tu samjhegi nahi. Real romance logistics pe tikta hai.
AMMU (soft smile):Waise tu bahut chilled hai.
Par tu kuch bhi kare, main samajh jaati hoon.
ZAHEER (softer tone):
Ajeeb hai na...kisi aur ke pyaar ko arrange karte hue kabhi-kabhi sochta hoon,
hum log kya kabhi us zone mein jaate bhi hain
AMMU :Shayad nahi...
Ya ho sakta hai hum kisi aur type ke zone mein hain.
Jahan hum dusron ke liye karte hain, par khud ke liye...
( Dono ek dusre ko dekhtay hain. No over-dialogue.)
AMMU (chuppi todte hue):
Chal, chocolate le aa fridge se. Tu deserve karta hai.
ZAHEER (getting up):Tu har scene mein emotional drop deti hai. Scripted lagta hai.
AMMU:Main toh naturally intense hoon.
Tu soch hostel wall cross karne ke badle chocolate mil rahi hai… fair deal.
ZAHEER (walking toward kitchen):Next time kisi ko propose karna hoga, main tujhe hi bhejunga.
AMMU (chillati hai):
“Chocolate dark wala le aana!”
TV off. Kitchen ka shelf half open.
Ammu sofa pe baithi hai, ek side ka earphone laga hai, dusre se textbook dheere-dheere close kar rahi hai.
Main door quietly khulta hai Zaheer shoes haath mein leke andar aata hai.Uska shirt messed up tha lekin wo khud relax lag raha tha.
AMMU (without looking at him):Late night secret missions chal rahe hain kya aajkal
ZAHEER (lightly):Bas thoda social service... dosti ke naam pe.
AMMU:Dosti ya daredevil delivery
Zaheer paani ki bottle leke ek sip leta hai. Ammu ab uski taraf dekh ke book band kar leti hai.
ZAHEER (sitting on sofa ):Ek banda apni girlfriend ko girls hostel ke window tak birthday wish karna chahta tha.
Arjun aur main bas... assistant directors ban gaye.
AMMU (grinning):
Toh tum dono ne hostel wall ko public park samajh ke operation chalu kiya
ZAHEER:Ek dum calculated risk.
Guard ko ghuma diya, window locate ki, gift handover,. Clean exit.
AMMU:Banda apni girlfriend ke liye hostel ke peechhe ghus gaya.
Tum log uske liye time table bana ke aaye
ZAHEER:Tu samjhegi nahi. Real romance logistics pe tikta hai.
AMMU (soft smile):Waise tu bahut chilled hai.
Par tu kuch bhi kare, main samajh jaati hoon.
ZAHEER (softer tone):
Ajeeb hai na...kisi aur ke pyaar ko arrange karte hue kabhi-kabhi sochta hoon,
hum log kya kabhi us zone mein jaate bhi hain
AMMU :Shayad nahi...
Ya ho sakta hai hum kisi aur type ke zone mein hain.
Jahan hum dusron ke liye karte hain, par khud ke liye...
( Dono ek dusre ko dekhtay hain. No over-dialogue.)
AMMU (chuppi todte hue):
Chal, chocolate le aa fridge se. Tu deserve karta hai.
ZAHEER (getting up):Tu har scene mein emotional drop deti hai. Scripted lagta hai.
AMMU:Main toh naturally intense hoon.
Tu soch hostel wall cross karne ke badle chocolate mil rahi hai… fair deal.
ZAHEER (walking toward kitchen):Next time kisi ko propose karna hoga, main tujhe hi bhejunga.
AMMU (chillati hai):
“Chocolate dark wala le aana!”
NEXT MORNING
Campus mein usual hustle bustle chal raha hai students aate ja rahe hain, kuch bench pe gossip, kuch canteen ki line mein.
Arjun aur Zaheer ek kone ki bench pe baithe hain. Zaheer ne backpack god mein rakha hai, Arjun ka face thoda stiff hai dono ke expressions se lag raha hai: kaand ho gaya hai, par pakde nahi gaye.
ARJUN (low voice):Principal ne sirf Ravi ko suspend kiya... hamara naam le bhi deta toh
ZAHEER (casually flipping a pen):Main toh mentally bike bech chuka tha.
Papa ko lagta hai main counter pe khada hoon aur main hostel wall ke peeche ninja mode mein ghoom raha tha
ARJUN:Mujhe toh abhi bhi darr lag raha hai... mummy ne bola tha ‘kisi ladki ke chakkar mein mat padna’… main toh delivery boy ban gaya.
ZAHEER:Tension mat le. Ravi ne bola tha ‘main hi gaya tha, main hi responsible hoon.’
Kya hi banda hai yeh — girlfriend se milne gaya aur jail almost ho gaya.
(Dono moment ke liye silent ho jaate hain, fir thoda sa hansa bhi dete hain)
TAZ college ke main hall se aata hai casual black hoodie, earphones neck pe latke hue. Uska expression hamesha neutral hota hai na friendly, na cold.
Woh Zaheer ke papa ki dukaan pe part-time kaam karta hai, toh familiarity hai.
TAZ :Toh... mujhe laga tum dono breakfast kar rahe hoge.
Par yahan toh chehre latak rahe hai.
ZAHEER :Kya kar raha hai Taz? Dukaan se off leke aaya?
TAZ (shrugs):Zaheer bhai ke liye toh heart bhi deliver kar doon, toh papa mujhpe bharosa kar lenge.Principal ne Ravi ko kaise pakda
ZAHEER :Guard ne kuch dekha tha... rest guesswork tha. Hamara naam nahi aaya.
TAZ :Interesting... matlab kaam perfect hua, lekin jo banda andar gaya woh gaya... aur heroes safe?Chalo, good job.
Waise, agar kabhi koi kaam underground chahiye ho na... ya info chahiye ho,
toh mujhe yaad kar lena.
Campus mein usual hustle bustle chal raha hai students aate ja rahe hain, kuch bench pe gossip, kuch canteen ki line mein.
Arjun aur Zaheer ek kone ki bench pe baithe hain. Zaheer ne backpack god mein rakha hai, Arjun ka face thoda stiff hai dono ke expressions se lag raha hai: kaand ho gaya hai, par pakde nahi gaye.
ARJUN (low voice):Principal ne sirf Ravi ko suspend kiya... hamara naam le bhi deta toh
ZAHEER (casually flipping a pen):Main toh mentally bike bech chuka tha.
Papa ko lagta hai main counter pe khada hoon aur main hostel wall ke peeche ninja mode mein ghoom raha tha
ARJUN:Mujhe toh abhi bhi darr lag raha hai... mummy ne bola tha ‘kisi ladki ke chakkar mein mat padna’… main toh delivery boy ban gaya.
ZAHEER:Tension mat le. Ravi ne bola tha ‘main hi gaya tha, main hi responsible hoon.’
Kya hi banda hai yeh — girlfriend se milne gaya aur jail almost ho gaya.
(Dono moment ke liye silent ho jaate hain, fir thoda sa hansa bhi dete hain)
TAZ college ke main hall se aata hai casual black hoodie, earphones neck pe latke hue. Uska expression hamesha neutral hota hai na friendly, na cold.
Woh Zaheer ke papa ki dukaan pe part-time kaam karta hai, toh familiarity hai.
TAZ :Toh... mujhe laga tum dono breakfast kar rahe hoge.
Par yahan toh chehre latak rahe hai.
ZAHEER :Kya kar raha hai Taz? Dukaan se off leke aaya?
TAZ (shrugs):Zaheer bhai ke liye toh heart bhi deliver kar doon, toh papa mujhpe bharosa kar lenge.Principal ne Ravi ko kaise pakda
ZAHEER :Guard ne kuch dekha tha... rest guesswork tha. Hamara naam nahi aaya.
TAZ :Interesting... matlab kaam perfect hua, lekin jo banda andar gaya woh gaya... aur heroes safe?Chalo, good job.
Waise, agar kabhi koi kaam underground chahiye ho na... ya info chahiye ho,
toh mujhe yaad kar lena.
Waqt ne apna kaam kar diya. College ke corridor, jo pehle sirf dosti aur bunk ki planning se bhare hote the, ab future ki tension ki baat hoti hai.
Zaheer aur Arjun ab apne final year mein hain dono ke chehre pe thodi maturity, lekin aankhon mein ab bhi wahi confidence. Arjun ki kapdon ki chhoti si dukan, jo kabhi nukkad pe chhoti lights mein chalti thi, ab ek proper branded showroom ban chuki hai,glass walls, AC, aur ek board jisme likha hota hai "Singh Clothing Co."
Arjun ke sapne jaise slowly form le rahe ho.
Zaheer aur Arjun ab apne final year mein hain dono ke chehre pe thodi maturity, lekin aankhon mein ab bhi wahi confidence. Arjun ki kapdon ki chhoti si dukan, jo kabhi nukkad pe chhoti lights mein chalti thi, ab ek proper branded showroom ban chuki hai,glass walls, AC, aur ek board jisme likha hota hai "Singh Clothing Co."
Arjun ke sapne jaise slowly form le rahe ho.
Ammu aur Shanu, ab college mein officially students ban chuki hain naye uniform, naye groups, aur naye nazariye ke saath. Pehle jo sirf unke bhaiyon ki kahaaniyon ka part thi, ab khud apni stories likh rahi hain. Ammu,famous ho chuki hai apni debates aur clean comebacks ke liye, jabki Shanu apne charm aur soft presence ke saath sabko slowly win kar rahi hai.
Vicky Arjun ka chhota bhai ab Delhi mein hai, higher studies ke liye. Uski room se ab loud cricket commentary nahi aati, lekin kabhi-kabhi Arjun ki phone ringtone pe uska naam flash karta hai “king of Logic calling.”
Vicky Arjun ka chhota bhai ab Delhi mein hai, higher studies ke liye. Uski room se ab loud cricket commentary nahi aati, lekin kabhi-kabhi Arjun ki phone ringtone pe uska naam flash karta hai “king of Logic calling.”
Aur Asma...Usne classical dance join kiya hai thoda stage shy hai, lekin jab music bajta hai, toh pura college hall uski taal pe ruk jaata hai.
Zaheer ke liye ab woh choti behen se zyada ek grown, thinking person ban gayi hai jo samajh gayi hai ki duniya mein kaise khud ko hold karke chalna hai.
Aur fir hai Taz.
Wahi Taz jo ab bhi college mein hai, ab zyada quiet, zyada busy…
Dukaan pe ab bhi part-time kaam karta hai, lekin campus mein uska presence kisi shadow jaisa hai
sab kuch dekhta hai, bolta kam hai… aur kis taraf hai, ye abhi bhi kisi ko pata nahi.
Zaheer ke liye ab woh choti behen se zyada ek grown, thinking person ban gayi hai jo samajh gayi hai ki duniya mein kaise khud ko hold karke chalna hai.
Aur fir hai Taz.
Wahi Taz jo ab bhi college mein hai, ab zyada quiet, zyada busy…
Dukaan pe ab bhi part-time kaam karta hai, lekin campus mein uska presence kisi shadow jaisa hai
sab kuch dekhta hai, bolta kam hai… aur kis taraf hai, ye abhi bhi kisi ko pata nahi.
Arjun aur Ammu ki bonding or jyada layer lete ja rahi thi
Dono ek doosre ko mehsoos karte hain, samajhte hain,
aur unki aankhon ke beech wo baat hoti hai jo zubaan kabhi keh nahi paayi.
Unka connection soft hai, clean hai, lekin unspoken.
Kisi ko kuch nahi pata na Zaheer ko, na Shanu ko, na duniya ko
par jab kabhi raasta chhota ho jaye aur dono saath chal rahe ho,
toh lagta hai jaise waqt bhi unki raftar se chal raha ho.
Sab apni-apni journey mein thode aage badh chuke hain.
Dosti wahi hai, faces wahi hain, par kahaani mein ek naya mood aur chhupa hua jazbaat aa chuka hai.
Dono ek doosre ko mehsoos karte hain, samajhte hain,
aur unki aankhon ke beech wo baat hoti hai jo zubaan kabhi keh nahi paayi.
Unka connection soft hai, clean hai, lekin unspoken.
Kisi ko kuch nahi pata na Zaheer ko, na Shanu ko, na duniya ko
par jab kabhi raasta chhota ho jaye aur dono saath chal rahe ho,
toh lagta hai jaise waqt bhi unki raftar se chal raha ho.
Sab apni-apni journey mein thode aage badh chuke hain.
Dosti wahi hai, faces wahi hain, par kahaani mein ek naya mood aur chhupa hua jazbaat aa chuka hai.
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