21-06-2025, 12:35 PM
(19-06-2025, 07:37 PM)Heartlover Wrote: Bro actually I got disappointed, i thought the next update will on the aftermaths of bus scene, sneha feeling sad about the bus encounter and then becomes horny thinking about it and masturbating and dhruv peeking it without her knowledge. But you straight away jumped to a different scene ?.
And don't make this story as ordinary as other stories where cuckold husband losing his wife to a goon or a dominative person, it was so good when story revolves on son's POV,
Keeping rakesh away always and just brings in for scary sequence only where he scars to the crimes and scams in the village.
Just think about it instead of Rakesh, Dhruv reads chats and feeling low or wanking for it would be so fun.
Please Don't make these kind of ordinary people sexting bro, now a days milkman, watchman, driver, domestic worker everybody sexting with a highly educated heroine instead of moin dhruv's friends can initiate sexting to sneha try to seduce her and taking to bed.
Just again and again these people creating seducing stories irritating bro, please don't make a goon or a rowdy like briju and moin just trying or seducing sneha, they can move harsh bro like now moin trying to seduce sneha and she's not falling for him and in right situation he or birju or any new harsh character forces her( like she is not willing for it and crying a full sex scene first 2 or 3 times and she couldn't do anything because they threatens her son's or hubby's life and after 2 or 3 times she sink into them)
Yeah I mentioned force sex but r*pe her or harm her just threaten her and do it without her Will while whole time she pleading.
And add some passing by character like the goons or robbers in bus scene( like rakesh or sneha's friend or friend's hubby, relative or dhruv's elder friend or rakesh colleague or dhruv's teacher or theives in midnight while rakesh is out of town or security officer investigating some theft or murder) some how just don't make the goons, tailor, driver, watchman, like regular stories which flood the site bro PLEASE JUST MAKE SOME ONE TIME STANDS TOO ?
Thanks for such a deep insight ful feedback
So this story has multiple layers and themes
Idea is to show the vulnerability of a high class memsaab in the hinterland of India .. the so called India left far away from Pubs , high end corporate office, high end jobs ...