19-06-2025, 07:50 PM
(19-06-2025, 07:45 PM)Mafiadon Wrote: Your writing is fantastic! I have read this story another forum. It is really wise decision to come to this forum. I have some ideas about this story.
1- Let Rabia and her husband remain as married and let Rabia make illicit and forbidden affairs with Akash and let her cheat on her loving husband secretly
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8-Later Rabia and rehana will have very good relation with them and they will become very naughty and befool their loving husbands.
I hope this story will be blockbuster and super duper hit if you write it according to the above mentioned theme. Wish you best of luck.
Totally agree with you.