Adultery The Untold Story of Abhiram's Erotic Journey - Part 1
(16-06-2025, 11:46 PM)tweeny_fory Wrote: Wow, that's quite a few posts dedicated to Meghana and her reflections after the yoga session eagerly waiting for the evening! As you being a woman author, I appreciate how well you've captured Mghana's emotions, feelings, and thoughts during this transformative period. The writing is clear and concise, really allowing her inner world to shine through. The arrival of her younger sister was a bit of a surprise, wasn't it? It seems some readers were disappointed by this mini-break in the momentum, and perhaps a little more consideration could have been given to its impact on the narrative flow. Now we're all eagerly anticipating how Abhiram and Meghana's relationship will evolve and deepen over the coming episodes, and with great anticipation!.


Hi tweeny_fory

Thank you so much for your kind words and thoughtful feedback! I'm really glad to hear that Meghana’s inner world resonated with you, that means a lot. ?

As for the arrival of her younger sister and that slight "pause" in the narrative momentum: that was actually a deliberate choice

If Abhi and Meghana had met that evening alone for dinner, given their state that evening, the emotional intensity and chemistry between them might have escalated too quickly, possibly leading them to go all the way. Since there are more romantic and significant scenes planned for them in the upcoming chapters, this break was necessary to maintain a natural and gradual build-up in their relationship.

The intention was to heighten anticipation while allowing their bond to deepen meaningfully over time. Thanks again for reading so closely, it's great to have engaged readers like you on this journey!

Truly appreciate your comments and feedback.

-- Shailu
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RE: The Untold Story of Abhiram's Erotic Journey - Part 1 - by shailu4ever - 17-06-2025, 04:04 PM



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