Adultery The Untold Story of Abhiram's Erotic Journey - Part 1

[shailu4ever]

Shailu, your writing is simply fantastic! This story of yours is truly an erotic masterpiece. I'm absolutely loving it to the core. The story, pacing, and characters are all great.

I like how each encounter has a different feel. Madhavi's episode was soft and sweet like a beautiful morning raga. In contrast, the episodes with Meghna were like a true rockstar performance, building in intensity, escalating passion, and pushing boundaries. 

I also appreciate how you included yoga poses. It's evident you've put in a significant amount of research. In fact, I found myself having to Google each pose to fully understand and then reimagine it within the scene It powerfully showcases the effort and dedication you've poured into this piece. 

The ending, "She didn't look back," is very meaningful. It shows Abhi and Meghna's growing connection. Wondering what's she gonna cook toning specially for him.

Hi tweeny_fory

Thank you so much for your incredibly kind and encouraging words! I’m genuinely touched that the story connected with you on so many levels—it means a lot to hear that the pacing, character dynamics, and tone shifts between the different encounters came through the way I hoped they would.

I love how you described Madhavi’s episode as a “beautiful morning raga” and Meghna’s as a “rockstar performance”, what a vivid and poetic way to put it! It’s really encouraging to know that the contrast and progression in the story are resonating with you.

I'm also really glad you noticed the effort that went into the yoga scenes. I did spend quite a bit of time researching those poses to ensure they felt authentic and meaningful within the narrative, so it’s incredibly rewarding to know that you took the time to explore them and reimagine them in context.

And yes, “She didn’t look back” was meant to say a lot in just a few words—I'm thrilled that it landed the way I intended. Your final line about her cooking something special for Abhi made me smile, it’s those little thoughts that make writing feel so rewarding.

Thanks again for reading so closely and for sharing your thoughts, it’s feedback like this that really keeps me going!

-- Shailu