Adultery The Untold Story of Abhiram's Erotic Journey - Part 1

[tweeny_fory]

She didn’t look back.

She didn’t need to.

Because whatever had started that morning… it wasn’t ending with goodbye.


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Shailu, your writing is simply fantastic! This story of yours is truly an erotic masterpiece. I'm absolutely loving it to the core. The story, pacing, and characters are all great.

I like how each encounter has a different feel. Madhavi's episode was soft and sweet like a beautiful morning raga. In contrast, the episodes with Meghna were like a true rockstar performance, building in intensity, escalating passion, and pushing boundaries. 

I also appreciate how you included yoga poses. It's evident you've put in a significant amount of research. In fact, I found myself having to Google each pose to fully understand and then reimagine it within the scene It powerfully showcases the effort and dedication you've poured into this piece. 

The ending, "She didn't look back," is very meaningful. It shows Abhi and Meghna's growing connection. Wondering what's she gonna cook toning specially for him.