Adultery NEMESIS

[Neelkantha]

Pretty good start and nice writing. I would like to point to a fact stated in the story which I think is an unintentional mistake. Frankenstein was not the name of the monster, he was the creator of that monster. His name was Victor Frankenstein, the scientist who tried to play god. As in Mary Shelley's famous novel. So, in your story, as per the narrative it should be the hubby played Frankenstein and made Frankenstein's monster out of his beloved wife.

And please, try to insert a line gap between two paragraphs in the post. On word file, there is no problem. However, here in the post editor, simple copy-paste from the word file will not work. You will have to add one more line-break between two paragraphs.

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First of all, thanks for commenting. And what you have said is true. The monster mentioned in the famous Gothic novel 'Frankenstein' written by Mary Shelley, in fact, has no name in the novel. Most of the time, it has been mentioned by the name of "the Creature". Later, when the novel was made into a Hollywood movie, it was made by the name of Frankenstein. There is also a misconception among people that the name of that creature was Frankenstein, which is wrong. It is not the name of that creature, it is the name of its owner. As you have also told. I mentioned that name here so that people can understand that monster or the Creature by that name. Anyway, after telling, I have corrected that mistake. If I make any mistake in the future, please feel free to tell me, so that I can correct it.

And as for line break between two paragraphs I have also that corrected. It's my pleasure for knowing that you've already liked the story. please keep reading, commenting and motivating me as always.